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| Stardawn 2008-05-08 ch 1,  | abusei liked it, but i'm afriad to say i didn't quite get what was going on. It seemed as if the begining bit was a fantasy-dream, and the last part was reality. either way, i really liked it. |
| lets just call me... 2006-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abusethat is so nice! i really like it. its sweet and so perfect... i wish nathaniel was still alive. |
| The Thirteenth Councilor 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abuseThe ending of PG kiled me, it really did. This brought a little of Nathaniel back. :) Excellent job. |
| Illusions Industry 2006-02-03 ch 1, | abuseI think I will never get over the end of the Bartimeus Trilogy. Your fic is a sweet little medicine :). Thank you ^^. |
| Contrarian 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseAngry? No way. I'm just really impressed. The emotion was all there, and it's kind of like reading the end of Ptolemy's Gate all over again. It annoys me that we never got to see what might have become of Nathaniel and Kitty if they had both come out of the struggle. Anyway, this is a very nice story. Great work! |
| Candelabra 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE NATHANIEL/KITTY! I WAS SO MAD AT JONATHAN STROUD FOR KILLING HIM! IT'S SO FRICKING SAD! :'( Secretly, I'm hoping that he'll either write another book or someone will write a fanfiction where he comes back ... not likely ... but ... I CAN'T STAND HIM BEING DEAD, IT'S So SAD! Anyway, great job! :) |
| ElRojo 2006-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abuse"Nathaniel... you idiot." That says it all... é_è I was depressed for days after reading Ptolemy's Gate... that was just so sad! I think you did a great job capturing Kitty's feelings. Your fic gives the same impression of unfairness the end of the book did; the brutal ending of Nathaniel and Kitty's relationship makes you wonder what could have happened... they had so much to say to each other! Anyway, well done! I really enjoyed your fic! |
| Bowles 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abuseWell, this was certainly very good. Reminds me of one Scrubs episode... I think it was called "My Big Screw-Up" where one of the character's friends dies and he pretends that he's still alive. The emotion was raw, and Kitty was in-character. Pretty good piece of work. |
| S. Jenkins 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abuse... This fic brought tears to my eyes. I am in awe of it. |
| tanyart 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abuseNicely done! I'm glad to have found a vignette about the aftermath since Mr. Stroud probably loves patronizing his readers. I'm feeling much more satisfied. Thank you for the lovely read! |
| TheFasterYouUpdateTheBetter 2006-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw... that was sad. Good, but sad. |
| Rachael 2006-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseYes, I have a heart. That was really well done. I liked it. |