holy ** Sora!!

This fic was extremely well written.
The picture you can imagine going through Kairi's mind,
the angsty feeling you get when you realize Sora came back.
Oh Im faving this one fer sher.
Write more.
You most definitely have talent.

Nice song ficcy. Love it.

i just had to lay down and let it all set it... this was just... sad... i just... my throat feels all weird and i feel like... i dont know... i just feel so... sad...

Woah... That is, apperently, the only word I could use to descibe this story. I mean how sad is it to have Kairi commit suicide... just as Sora was coming back. Sad, but it's great. Keep up the good work.

you big douschbag! ya killed kairi! you right i do hate you!(but just a bit :))

Dat almost made me cry, but Kairi isn't really suicidal and emo, so it's embellishing her character a bit. but nice story

WOW.

OH MY GOD. I absolutely LOVED this! This was so beautifully written, and I just plain loved it. It rocked with its own unique style of tragicness, despair, and heartbroken-ness. All I have to say is wow.

Well, along with this: So is this done then? Cuz it says it's complete but evidently you're saying it's not..? Just wondering, tho. Anyways you're a great writer, you have talent, and I can not stress to you enuff how this is totally awesome!!

Awe. I loved it. ^^ Angst = love.

- y a k o s o k u -

this story was just not right. the thought that sora would have to see her dead in her tub is wrong. i know you didnt mean to offend anyone with this, but in my opinion, it should never have been thought up. im sorry, i hate this story. it was sad and tragic, but you should have done it with another cast of characters. Kingdom Hearts, in my opinion, is not about stuff like this. I know my opinion doesnt matter, but im just telling the truth. sorry. Kairi and Sora were not the right two characters for this. =(

pleas etell the name of this song I LOVE It!

your fanfiction was so sad... Kairi killing herself, just as Sora came back for her... >.

Look, I really hate you for this! Writing such a sad story! I'm seriously angry of you! >:(

HELL YEAH I DO T_T i was crying afterwards, nah ^_^ only kidding i don't hate ya. god that was really sad though i mean she kills herself just as he came home (anime crys badly) IF ONLY SHE'D HUNG ON FOR 9.56 SECONDS LONGER HE COULD OF STOP HER AND THEY WOULD OF BEEN HAPPY TOGETHER!

Sora: (covering his ears in pain) AH!

hee sorry, you did well ^_^ (gives you hot chocolate)

Woah! Yes! I hate Kairi and glad she's dead.
Geez I thought I threw some nasty temper tantrums but man was I wrong. Anyways, good story and I like the plot. That's funny how Sora came back like the same day Kairi finally lost it. LoL.

Oh... that was so sad...

But that was an amazing story, nonetheless.

Angst is so depressing, but the way that you wrote it made it... almost beautiful... haha I know that sounds weird, but i guess I've been feeling moody lately, too.

Well, great job. =)