This is a first time (or near first time) story that I can get behind. I find it easier to write P/Q as an established relationship than as a first time, so I can skip all the thorny questions of how they adjust to one another's differences and all the pranks Q has pulled in the past. Reading your story makes me long for more. I hope you intend to do a sequel. Pretty please?

A very interesting view into Q's mind. I hope that you'll continue with this.

Wow. Ilove it!