This Ia An Awesome Story!
Why Haven't You Updated?!
Please update Soon!
PLEASE!

This is great! I know you think it's a lost cause, but I know you will be able to write again(unless you gave up completely).

hey, iv fallen in love with your story! update soon, k? ^_^

>u<
I love it!

*points at you*

Its your fault now that Im a fan of ChaseOmi and Omijack fics!

*jumps around*

Omg! I love it~

*glomps*

and...
Im not going to ask you to update...

besides... I know what it feels... >.>

you are a wondrous author, if i spelled that right xD

you rule so hard!

Jack is getting stranger. Does he even want to be an 'Evil Boy Genius' anymore?

Very good. I like the third person setting that is used. Poor Jack though.

We~! I didn't notice that you had updated. ^_^ I really like where this story is going.I can't wait for the next update~!

~Nasyki

This is getting more and more exciting! I love how you portrayed Jack's obsession. :)

I'm guessing that the following chapters will be Jack prowling around the temple and hungry for glimpses of Omi.

Whoa! This fic sure changed! Sounds like this will be quite a yarn.

hey good idea, i like long chpts whenit comes to OxC pairsing, but tht's only because there aren't tht many *^-^* anyway i like this story & i hope u continue

Wow, I feel really bad for Jack... But I like where this story is going!

The unrevised version of this story is but a vague memory, but from I have gathered, I like this version. Continuation is the next part of the process after posting.

Cute!