 kiplingskat 2009-10-14 . chapter 3 Prepare yourself, this is going to be long...
I have to admit, I had to back off from reviewing for a little while after I'd finished. If I hadn't, this entire comment would have consisted of incoherent flailing and garbled sounds of awe and devotion.
I am a notorious lurker here on . Most of the time, I feel that what I think of a fic has usually been expressed completely and properly by other reviewers. In this case, I had to speak up.
I found the first of your series, 'Surviving This', earlier today and, many hours later, finished reading the entire saga (alternate endings and alternate sequels included). I was blown away.
Being an english major, and huge movie buff, there is nothing that irritates me more than stories that shift a character's voice and POV so much that they are almost unrecognizable. The way you developed not only Lex's character, but also our perceptions of Scar and his companions, was done at just the right pace and with just the right balance of trepidation, confusion, and acceptance.
Same goes for the romance aspect. I have to admit, if you'd asked me before I read this what I thought of alien+human romance/smut my response would have been an immediate and eloquent "Eeww!" I have been converted and I salute you for it.
Wonderful story, compelling OC's and skillful plot development. What more can I do but offer my firstborn and thank you for such a wonderful series of stories? I hope to see more of your efforts in the future! |
 aGreatPenName 2009-08-23 . chapter 3So I just read Surviving this, Sacrifice Theory, as well as this (Solitary trial) all in one bout of reading, and I'm horrifcally entranced.
First and foremost I'd like to state I've never read any AvP fanfiction before and somehow I stumbled onto your profile and fatefully decided to read on the whim of "Why the hell not?". And all I can tell you is "WOAH" it was a trippy, funny, action packed, slap in the face of awesome!
It was all very well written, and what I particularly loved was the subtle characteristics you gave Lex and Scar. They seemed all the more loveable, and as they acted upon thier actions their relatioship progressed in such a fascinating and believable way. You really brought them to life!
I am rightfully flabergasted. So kudos to you for weaving such an adventurous story with an equal amount of fluff N stuff!! Definately favs!! <3 |
 switchitt 2009-07-25 . chapter 3 brilliant! whats going to happen next i wonder? don't leave us all hanging now! your stories are all so brilliant. |
 PrincessChitra 2009-04-21 . chapter 3oh my
i was looking for one of these lemony parts to read
hehe
call me sick but i was curious lol
anways i enjoyed reading ur story
the only sucky part is tht
i just discovered the alien movies lmso
awesome btw =] |
 brainfear 2009-04-01 . chapter 3Wow. That's hot. Damn! |
 slayerb8 2009-03-26 . chapter 3I really liked this series. I hope you consider to continue this story or at least a 10 years later type thing. Anyway Good Job. |
 Arcana 2009-03-15 . chapter 3 ...MOAR.
Seriously, you have me completely hooked- go watch the movie again for some inspiration!
You wrote this perfectly, and were so in tuned with the characters, it was awesome! |
 Lady Natsume 2009-03-01 . chapter 1great story, is it complete? |
 JenEvan 2009-02-25 . chapter 3Beautiful. With a hint of poignant, but wrapped with a fuzzy warm ending, just like going through cold midnight and finally seeing the dawn :)
Hope to see more of your fics :) |
 Michelangelicious 2008-12-17 . chapter 3Yay! Closure. :) I liked this ending a lot. I was a little ticked when Reed was alive in the original part 3. I hated him so much and was glad for his torturous death. Wonderful job with this new ending. I'd love to see further adventures involving Scar and Lex, but I know all good things must come to an end. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story. :D |
 Michelangelicious 2008-12-17 . chapter 1^.^ I think I like this sequel more. I hated reading that she didn't remember Scar. |
 ElfMaidenOfLight 2008-11-12 . chapter 3This was the PERFECT ending to the trilogy. Absolutely _perfect_!
Your characterization was spot on, the entire time! And for there not being much spoken 'dialogue' between the main characters, the relationships were gradual and fluid and very, very well done.
I think I'll have to re-read some of my favorite parts, because it's just _that good_
BTW- just a suggestion- you could edit chapter 2 and take out the part about 'a link in your profile' because I just got a little confused. And, mark the story as complete! There's nothing more satisfying within fanfiction then being able to mark it as such!
Anyway, loved this! I will be reading more of your stuff, to be sure! |
 Firebrand 2008-08-17 . chapter 3 I really wish you would write more...your characterization is spot on! |
 Anonymous 2008-07-15 . chapter 2 In the third paragraph before the end of the chapter, Scar was wearing his mask. But in the rest of the chapter, he wasn't. |
 darkchild 2008-07-04 . chapter 3 Please update as soon as possible^_^... |