i love these series! on to the next one! YAY :D

You should really use the ruler provided by the site you know? Before publishing your newest chapter, edit it and look for the ruler button, it'll make your chapters look neater. It just doesn't seem quite so convenient when you've to rewind back a few lines just to put yourself into another scene. By using the ruler, not only will your chapters be neater, but your readers will also have time to mentally prepare themselves for a change in scenery, which will make their reading pace smoother.

All in all, I really do commend you on your fantastic plot, though your grammatical mistakes leaves a dent in the picture. Thankfully, there're not too many of them, and the intended meaning is easily understood.

I loved the dynamic in the relationship between Minako and Artemis. I really enjoyed Kunzite's dry humor, and watching Kunzite, Zoisite, and Mamoru get to know each other.

I really love how you tie everything together. The 'mother' scene was the best parts lol.

that was awesome.

lovely stories

cannot wait for the next installment!

I've absolutely loved it! Damn, it's been way too long since I've read a sen/gen fanfic as good as this one ;) Congrats _!

"She could’ve been invited to the wedding and accidentally bumped into the man of her dreams while dancing." - LOL! btw - I always love Makoto's checklists hehehe

Yay! Another chapter from the funniest author out there. I LOVED this! It was so beautiful and long! This was absolutely perfect-it was funny, it was well-written, you came up with a fantastic ending, and you even managed to hook Amy up. I'm very impressed with you! Are you going to do the Rei/Jade part as a separate story? Well, whatever you decide, I can't wait. You're awesome, and I keep telling everyone to read your stuff. You're one of the best!

FANTASTIC!

Oh how I loved it! Let's see why:

1) Ami's got a boyfriend! Ami's got a boyfriend! Oh how sweet! And that Old Fox tricked her into doing exactly as he wanted! Yay for Zoicite!

2) Uh-ho.. Zoi's remembering! Let's hope he remembers the good times first, ne? Something besides demons on the moon and Beryl.

3) Minako and Kunzite moving in together! YAY-NESS all around! Even though it's crazy, and Kunzite knows it's crazy, he still won't give her up. Aw, how sweet!

4) Jadeite! Need I say anything more? He was always my favorite shittenou.

5) Luna and Artemis alone... haha poor Kunzite's apartment!

6) Minako brought up Nephrite to Makoto. Nice to see he is still remembered and loved.

Well well, although it pains me that you will be taking your time with the Rei/Jadeite story, I will survive! If nothing else, I love how your stories aren't too short or just randomly stop. You actually plan them and take your time writing out what you want! You're a great writer! And I now have 4 pounds of chocolate and candy for you my dear wingedleona! Take it all and more! You certainly deserve it!

Well, enjoy your time in France (I went to France over the summer... if you have a free day, go to the Palace of Versailles. The gardens are magnificent, and it could be a great muse for you!) Just act snooty and French and they'll love you!

Keep writing! Your words are golden! _

- Maia -

I have to give you huge kudos and lots of praise for writing such a long and well-written chapter! That takes some dedication! Your scene in the car right before they drop Minako off was classic. I laughed for a while. Your description of Zoicite's hair really brought his character to life. I'm glad that in the end, everything worked out between Mina/Kunz. Can't wait to see the Jadeite/Rei story!

Oohh,I thought Jadeite gonna be related to the Jade Tree Bakery. Did'nt see that one coming. Cant wait to read about Rei/Jadeite. Great story. Good luck in your study,kay!

WOOT! REI/JADEITE! ULTRA WOOT! CAN'T WAIT!

Minako, don't cry! You get the part!

...she get's the part, right?

Wonderful. I love it! :D Please do continue on writing more and more fanfics.

I'm loving this so far! _ Your characterization is excellent.

This chapter had something funny going on with the line breaks that made it kind of hard to read. Also, there were some stray punctuation marks. When you have a quote within a sentence, I'm pretty sure you normally use a comma at the end instead of a period. For example:

“This is ridiculous.”, exploded the dark-haired girl...

should be

"This is ridiculous," exploded the dark haired girl...

But all in all it is very good! *goes off to read the rest*