My gosh. What to say...

I come back to this story, over and over. I absolutely cannot get enough of it. Masterfully written, wonderful conveying of emotions... I honestly cannot think of any critique at all. And that's saying something for me.

You rock hard. Keep it up.

Akiko (The Mistress Of All Things Spork)

wow this is good

Amassing, simply amazing. You found a way to make something that really hit be in side (if that made sense) it was beautiful.

DUDE, WTF. YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BE DEAD.

Don't get me wrong, I like the fact you're not completely dead. I just wasn't expecting this. It's awesome. It's almost like you didn't fall off the face of the Earth. I loved it. And you got Yuffie's character perfectly.

"Her heart had finally burst, and Squall was taking the remains with him."

That line just...got me.

That was so sad! I'm glad that you're still able to write Squffie, and this is a testament to the Glory Days of Squffiedom before YuRiku took everything over. October, your work is still brilliant!

(I think the elements for them could be interchangable - Squall's anger is like an inferno, and Yuffie is smooth, easy-going, flowing, like water.)

Woah. Wowwie. What. Awesome.

Great, pretty, intense.

I love it all. The title

is super-awesome. I hearteth

it. Perfect.

Wow. That was... Intense and amazing. I liked it. Gravy 1.

V. RayZ

Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow.

This was great. I love it.

The whole fire and water thing

was perfect. Absolutely perfect.

This story's good, but sad...I think...but it's really good! But I don't get these kinda stories when they say "You're protecting yourself." Does that mean something like Squall protecting himself from feeling hurt if he looses someone he loves? I'm not really good in parts like these...heheh...but I like them anyways. Write another!

aw, that was sad! looking forward to more of your work!

OhBe wrote again! I am... so happy! -teary eyes- You, after all, are one of the main reasons that I got into squffie! -starry eyes- And as for this story.. I love you. I loved you from story one. And I still love you. This is amazing. And the writing is just... just... perfect. The squffie is perfect. The dialogue (how romantic a word) is beyond perfect. I love it, if you hadn't already figured that out.

I hope-hope-hope-hope you'll keep writing!

-plumbob/noey/skai