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Reviews For: Rose for an Orchid

Zino
2008-02-23
ch 1,
abusewow, such a cute story! :O
master of toast
2008-01-17
ch 1,
abusei love this pairing! this is great!
bloom
2007-08-26
ch 1, anon.
abusei like the pair... nice work.. but it could've been more romantic.. =)
Animefangirl2007
2006-12-17
ch 1,
abuseWow!! I really liked it but next time I hope that Shinichi and Kazuha see when Heiji kisses Ran and Shinichi and Kazuha hit Heiji or gets very mad!!
pedal
2006-07-08
ch 1,
abuseInteresting idea. I've been working on a fic with hints of this pairing for the sake of its weirdness and Conan's growing insanity in it. I found your fic when I suddenly started wondering, 'Huh. I wonder if anyone though of this too.' Glad to know I'm not alone in my goofy ideas. Kudos ^^

Anyway, your fic: awesome. This well written and believeably executed. It made me warm and fuzzy inside. =) You have great potential to expand this idea if you ever wanted to, and I fully encourage it. We need something new to shake this fandom before the 10th movie gets out.

Whatever you decide to do, do good and keep writing.
Basser
2006-05-08
ch 1,
abuseHaha. That was cute. Very nice. I've never even THOUGHT of Heiji/Ran before! But I suppose it's only natural, considering they're all exactly the same as all the other DC couples... Heiji, Shinichi, and Kaito. The Aoyama cookie-cutter boys. Collect 'em all! Mix n' match! Heheheh.. Kaito/Kazuha? How about Shinichi/Aoko? Sorry, just rambling now. xD Whee.

Really, though. Through all that my quintessentially nerdy, fanfic'd brain thinks "So what's Conan doing?" Moping, probably. Heiji'll have a job on his hands explaining himself when he brings Ran home with her rose (and the tearstained face, of course. Booh how sad.) :P Poor ol' Shinichi.
Colormyworld
2006-01-24
ch 1,
abuse^^ Well I did read it and it's very interesting!
inuwolf04
2006-01-21
ch 1,
abusehmph!! weird pairing ideas, yeah. too many rk pairing mix-ups too, miss blake. *glare* but anyways, on to my review--love it! so cute!...but still...weird pairing...sue, but you still got there first! yay!!
sky
2006-01-20
ch 1, anon.
abusehi! nice to meet you. how are you? hehe I was wanted to say...this may be youre first fic but its so kawaii!its great!hehe no offense to shinichi but its so sad for ran,...he's always too busy with case's to be there for her.Im sorry if I offended you...but great story there,..if you have spare time could you please make another one? thank you very much.
god bless and take care
sky
Fyliwion
2006-01-18
ch 1,
abuseWow really different take ^^ I like it.. its refreshing and quite a nice little twist.. and like you said it can be taken several different ways. Nice job ^^
SoulSeeker
2006-01-17
ch 1,
abuseArgh it took me forever for the stupid little popup thing to finally come up for me to review! >_<

Anyway, what I've been trying to say for the past like, hour (yes I was THAT determined to review this fic lol), is that I think you took the Heiji/Ran approach really nicely!

Being a big Shin/Ran fan myself, I was a little scared at first lol, but I enjoyed it! I see it as more of a friendship, though I'm not sure how you intended it to be ;)
manda
2006-01-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseSorry to disappoint, but I actually liked the twist despite the shinran fan that I am. :^)

Good job man, this was impressive--especially since the relationship between Ran and Heiji are subtle enough to be left up to the reader. There were a couple of parts that seemed definitely staged, but other than that this was a cute little thought experiment.
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