that was kind of weird but in a good way you know
i really liked it good job

Heh, three things.

First, I just realized you're from the shrine. So HI. xD

Second, I'm Eskimo from the shrine. So HI AGAIN. xDD

Third, you're a genius. So YAY YOUR GENIUS. xD

Haha... too... much... pizza...

Remind me not to eat four slices next time.

While your writing and syntax was (as always) beautiful, I have to agree with you that this piece lacked emotional connection, which surprised me. I have to say that it's not one of your better pieces. (But you're still an amazing writer!)

...damn...that was depressing. EXACTLY the mood the last episode put me in. It wasn't like I disliked the episode...it was just such a downer. Sad...but...still a really good fic on your part. Great imagery and good job on writing Robin's thoughts. Keep up the great work!

Wow, that was insanely depressing :o I think you did an awesome job with it though, despite all your self-criticism. You captured a great deal of emotion and it was all extremely well written, you should be proud of it! ^.~

~*~DOJ~*~

I really liked it eventidespirit! YOu did hit you're mark; it was truely angsty. I have been trying to watch the eisode again, but I just can't bring myself to do it, because it is the end...

One improvement you could make is make the thoughts of Robin and Star more prominent. Like, what were they thinking throughout that battle? What was their final impression about their battles and how their relationship has formed over this year and the others? What about before, when they realized their favourite places were gone? Get a little more in depth, and don't just spring on the whole relationship thing. Sorry if I sound harsh, but I want to be helpful.

Please continue to write; I like your style.

The fic was quite well-written and as far as your views on "Things Change" I mostly agree although I think I liked the episode more than you did.

But there did seem to be a major flaw in logic in this fanfic. Robin refuses to be with Starfire because his feelings for her could be used against him? And he uses the past experience with Slade as evidence? The fact remains that anyone and everyone he cares about can be used that way. It would not change if they got into a romantic relationship (as they did in the comics).

Robin's in far too deep to ever really be like Batman, and even Batman isn't able to keep himself all alone. To be safe from having villains use people against him Robin would have to stop caring, and that is something he can never do.

So to quote Amanda Waller from JLU: "You want to live a happier life than the old man? Keep the people you love close to you."

I know how you feel, but as one fan pointed out to me, 'It's the perfect season ending, if not the perfect _series_ ending.' Still though, the white light sequence at the end was a nice touch.

So onto the actual piece of work. I didn't get the whole 'OMG I'm SO ANGSTY love me dammit!' sense from this [which is a good thing] but the romance wasn't quite there... Hmm. Other than that, it was written well. Good job.

I liked it. Things Change made me attempt a quick fanfiction as well and I'm not completely satisfied with how it turned out either. I am in the minority in actually liking the episode, although I'm thinking when Amy wrote it that she had no clue it would end up being the last one. The mysterious new villain and Terra's new status quo (not to mention the Slade robot) were just begging for another season. Ah well.