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Nalana
2006-01-22
ch 7,
abuseThat was adorable! Not only did it have 'current' events being dealt with, but also a future part. (which, by the way, was adorable. Baby AND...SEDGE! Yes, Sedge. Thank you so much for that. *L* What? I want to see a dog runnin' down the halls of Atlantis! And a lil one wobbling after it.)

Grand story!
jenny sherman
2006-01-22
ch 7, anon.
abusehiya

just wanted to say that i just read your story deals made and i wanted to tell you that it was very good.

Well written and easy to read. Keep it up.
Crazy 4 Atlantis
2006-01-22
ch 7, anon.
abuse*sque* I love fluff! and honestly, the story was great. I thought that the Genii gave in too easily also, so this just made me go "AHA! I KNEW IT!" great story and you capture the characters wonderfully! keep writing
TheNaggingCube
2006-01-21
ch 7,
abuseSweet ending but I really wanted one more of healing to happen.
Falcon Horus
2006-01-21
ch 7,
abuseAw, the perfect ending to a very nice story...I enjoyed all 7 chapters. Thank you!
Tinuviel Undomiel
2006-01-21
ch 7,
abuseAww, *melts into a puddle of fluff* So good. I'm so sad that it's over though.
airbear23
2006-01-20
ch 6,
abuseGreat story. Can't wait for the last chappie!
Tinuviel Undomiel
2006-01-20
ch 6,
abuseYEAH! We need fluff, you gotta love the fluff.
LtCol Carter
2006-01-20
ch 6,
abuseMost excellent... and did I mention how much I like fluff? Sam :)
TheNaggingCube
2006-01-20
ch 6,
abuseVery cool! Okay you so have to have John handing Ronon back his gun and thanking him. And Ronon asking if he could come along next time... Cuz you know darn well that wuss Genii would need to change his shorts with both John and Ronon there!
Tinuviel Undomiel
2006-01-19
ch 5,
abuseI was surprised about the rape bit, I normally don't like it when people do that, but I'm okay with this. I wonder what you are going to do next.
TheNaggingCube
2006-01-19
ch 5,
abuseNot sure how I've missed this story but I'm glad I found it. Keep it coming, like to see where you go with it.
Falcon Horus
2006-01-19
ch 5,
abuseOMG, that Genii twist was brilliant... Caught me completely of guard!!

SO, more to come ... yay!
mentalmichael
2006-01-18
ch 4,
abuseWow. That's a horrible little addition to the Seige II storyline.

Other than that though, you write well and I look foward to seeing more of this story.
vickyann
2006-01-18
ch 1,
abuseThis is an awesome story, I'm really enjoying it!
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