A good fic, well done. I commend you for your effort. Your descriptions are flawless, and you displayed the characters very effectively. I hope to see more soon.

Write well.

Great story. I loved it. Great work.

wow...i loved it! i liked the way you compared Naruto's colours to the dull grey of Neji's world. very poetic and touching. Very well written and original!
I can't wait to read more!