Incredibly beautiful and very, very touching. As for your writing, it has a gorgeous fairy-tale quality to it itself. It's to the point, but when it digresses, it's just as fantastic.

Keep on writing, you're brilliant.

I really like it. I can feel his emotion in this. The part that really made me smile was the last line, because it just sounds some much like what Wash would say.

simply beautiful - made me cry!

"His ever after was here.

And it had been worth it."

Best ending ever. Lovely.

that was sad. real shiny written, but sad.

wow. i loved this. you got the voice PERFECTLY. great job and i hope to see more. :)