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Tamie123
2009-11-08 . chapter 5
Those people were so dense, prejudice, and malicious. That was terrible that they condemn those children like that. I feel more sympathy for the Frontier protagonists then I do anyone else in the story. I myself do not believe everything the history book said because it tends to miseducate people on some topics though I cannot expect most people to not believe everything what the history book said since it is consider to be a record of events that happen in the past. I am guess that society will still shun them when they figure out who they are. I would not be surpise that people made books, movies, etc. that portray them in a derogatory way. I know I probably am taking this to serious but I this story reminds me of so much of people who have been persecuted throughout history in real life. It seems like Rei is starting to see that they are not evil like society portray them to be and that is a good thing.
I.N.V
2006-07-07 . chapter 5
FINALLY! Do you know how long i was waiting for this story, KJ?! ANyways, its getting good, please, do update pretty soon on your story.
Basic Imperfection
2006-07-06 . chapter 5
Awesome chapter! Rei's closed-mindedness is kind of annoying though *shrugs* But then, what's to be expected when it's been taught that the "hybrids" were evil for over a thousand years. ^.^ Update again soon! Ja ne!

~*~Fallen Angel~*~
izumi minamoto
2006-07-06 . chapter 5
hey^^ good job once again! but honestly... you made me wait THAT LONG for such a short update? update more frequently! it's interesting! ^^

anyway, it's spelled 'mimicked' n.n

great story, keep updating!
izumi minamoto
2006-05-18 . chapter 4
evil people! weird slangs! totally unusual! totally great!! that was so interesting! you simply must update soon^^
Angel Born of Darkness
2006-05-13 . chapter 4
yay they're awake
lizzy
2006-05-12 . chapter 4
It is I, Lizzy! ^.^v ...yes about your story...this chappie sucked! Nah!! Just kidding!! It good, i wonder wht Rei needs their help for...please let me know now!! I demand it...
Basic Imperfection
2006-05-12 . chapter 4
Heh, I can't wait to see how they're all going to react when they find out what's happened and how people view them. That'll be hilarious XP Update again soon! Ja ne!

~*~Fallen Angel~*~
chocolatelover1
2006-04-09 . chapter 3
Wow...very creative, got me interested into finding out what the next chapter is about, please hurry and update!!
Salark
2006-04-07 . chapter 3
This is very interesting, and worth continuing. I can't wait to see whats happens next. So please update soon.
I.N.V
2006-03-26 . chapter 3
...Not bad. I have to admitt...this is a very good story. Please keep going. I would love to see what happens next.
Basic Imperfection
2006-03-22 . chapter 3
Ooh, you've definitely caught my interest. I'm interested to see what happens next so update soon! Ja ne!

~*~Fallen Angel~*~
Angel Born of Darkness
2006-03-22 . chapter 3
yoo are a very evil person you know cuz if you dont i'll tell you *clears throat* you are evil, there. any way is she going to "accedentally" awaken them
Angel Born of Darkness
2006-02-01 . chapter 2
they r so evil they are kids for gods sake does he not have any shame
BlackThornedLillies
2006-01-31 . chapter 2
Ur making the villan named after Uncle Bone? I do find it funny that his name is Bob... heh

One comment. DAMN SHORT CHAPTER! U get on every1 else fer it, so now I shall get on u fer it. Update.

*Lillies*
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