shouldn't you be taking bets?"

"On a Ranma-Akane duel? Get real."

[Not much question there, is it?]

you kawaikune tomboy."

[Unnecessary Japanese]

you bakayaro hentai."

[Unnecessary Japanese]

I took great pains to make sure it wasn't a lemon

[Failed, the story, while more circuitous and told more through the POV of other characters, still revolved around them having sex]

Up until that ‘last scene’ with Akane and Ranma, it seemed like a fair story. Unfortunately, that last bit was what the story revolved around.

LOL! Excellent twist!

Whahaha! I KNEW IT!
*does a little jigg, ignoring people giving him strange looks*

love it. very interesting.

...interesting, i liked, but i was rather... shocked to say the least...

you are sick

o.O I think I've read this somewhere beofre...

LOL, Oh my GOD! Now *that* I was not expecting! *claps wildly* 10 stars!

BRAVO!(strenious applause)

Whahahahahahahahahaahahaha! Now THAT was a twist!