PILLOW FIGHT! WOOT!
Please say this will be continued!
It will won't it?
I LOVE THIS STORY!

I don't usually read Trigun fics, but this one has captured my attention. I look forrwardt oreading more.^^

That. Was. Hilarious. You have a real way of conveying the relationships between charecters, and writing about them without degrading them and keeping them true to themselves. Not to mention the fact that it was about the funniest thing I've read in quite some time. Honest-to-coffee. Wow. Brillance in it's most pure form.

*bursts out laughing* HAHAHA! The heaven thing! Ha! *is writing the review as she reads*

"Just think, Wolfwood. Now we can teach you how to _bathe_." That's great.

"A epic pillow fight, the likes of which the poor, unexpecting planet of Gunsmoke had never witnessed and never would again, then ensued. I assure you it was quite the heroic and legendary battle, one worth a song or two to recount its glory, but at the very moment it had begun, something much more important to our plot was occurring across the hall." The 'several songs' recounting their fight was a good touch. ^__^

STFU! HAHAHA! You actually used it! Ah, that's great.

There were a lot of great lines in this. And, for once, a minimum of typos! *snort* But really, I liked it.

Very nice. Well-written, in-character, and quite fun and humorous. I even chuckled a few times while reading.

The only mood ruin-er I spotted was near the end with the "What I’m Saying Goes, So Stfu Already" look. Online acronyms = not to be used in a story. Instead, replace it with "shut up" or even "shut the ** up" to be entirely blunt.

OMG. Blu you finaly posted it. I love it. You need to update soon. NEED!

who doesn't like whom how?!? i must know. very entertaining start.

-does a ancient indian review tribal chant backwards through her vocorder while accompanying herself on the electric cello which she has never studied- Woo.

Finally this is up! You told me about this late in the school year last year, then again, it started out different then, so this is new. Wait, no its not. You told me about this too! But its a whole new experience reading it myself. If I were over at your house, you'd probably read it to my yourself, and that, too, would be fun and new!

Anyways, -waits patiently for FMN to be updated- I'll just sit here and watch this. Bye!

Great jobbidy!

~Buggeh

-claps- Nice start, Blu. It's always a pleasure to be able to read something of yours, especially as a beta. Thank you!

Anyways, you did a nice job. It's a humorous and creative way to start the story and sets up the plot and shows that all the characters are going to be themselves (in character). It also sets the tone for the story.

I specifically liked the mentions of the Bible and the ways it's used. The whole pillow-fight idea was fun and creative.

I can't wait for it to get into the namesake of the story, though. The real plot. It'll be fun to see. ^^ Keep it up sweety!