Excellent job! All us girls love Melan's POV. I love it! Favs!

Aw...that was so CUTE! Keep it up!

that was so beautiful>_

wow. very cool.

'One moving to lop around her legs and knees, the other around her torso the end resting on the back of her head. Much like I did after she’d given herself to me'
that's confusing me...what did she do?
and please write more it is so romantic and cute!

Please, please, please finish this story. Its so good Please, I'm almost desprete to read more. Ignore the bad spellining. Please.

aww kawaii i really like this fic ;) update soon please

Oh, the fluff! I'd almost say it was too much, but it really wasn't.

Alright then! Second chapter please! As soon as you can, please and thankyou and dangit it's about time there were more Brigadoon fics around here!

*coughcough* Okay... so that was a rant. Don't mind me. Brigadoon's my favorite anime.

Till next time, this is Iniora Nackatori, singing out!