This is amazing! You should definitely write more like this.

That was really well written. Very well done.

I liked that, btu it was a little too wordy. don't get me wrong, I use big words all the thime & I understood exactly what you are saying, but how can something that has already peremeated be subsequent? anyway, apart from that, I liked it a lot.

I have been searching for really well written Mal/Inara, preferably fluff. I found my way to your stories and, well, I love you.

I'm reading Sands of Time too, and will continue when I'm not falling asleep over the keyboard.

Truly a beautiful piece of writing that really did hypnotise me! Thank you.

that was beautiful...i didn't know anyone could make Mal sound graceful! (at least in slumber)...great job

lovely piece. I enjoyed the slow pace and the emotion from Inara's pov.

very sweet & nice. although it's hard to picture Inara at a loss for words. :)

good

A very lovely, quiet, meditative piece. I like the way you keep up the slow and thorough pace, from the fresh-rumbling sound of the rain to the ever so hopeful note of the last line. Starting a new day, rain washing everything old away.

A beautiful small scene. :)

these two just leave me feeling light and fluttery. c'est beau! sere mi eru...lsoa

Firstly I thought it was about Wash being dead.

Huh.

But beautifully written.

Love this, it could be anyone in the crew.

You did hypnotize me with this story.

Wrenn

...Wow. Just...wow. Powerful, yet so very tender. Beautiful. Very beautiful. Nice job!

What a great insight into how Inara might feel waking up next to Mal...and I love how all she can come up with is "Good morning"...and the Cap'n DOES have enchanting blue eyes...you cant really blame the girl for starin! lol but in all seriousness...wonderful fic...hope you write some more Mal/Inara!

Oh, so sweet and poetic. Loved it.