AHHH! that was awesome! i nearly cried, so well written! the discription used, how perfect everything flowed without being too mushy, omg i just cant get over how awesome that was

normally i read pokemon fanfics, but i fell in love with the Tales games and have been reading their fics lately. Your Genea fanfic is one of the best romance one-shots I've read.

KEEP WRITING GREAT STORIES!

This is so CUTE! There are a few spelling problems, but nothing bad.

one word: AW! that's so cute! I love that pairing...

one thing though, Presea wouldn't use so many !s. she speaks calmly. you wrote Genis well, though! heh... I can just imagine him berating himself like that. )

) This was just the story I was looking for! Angsty in the beggining, then fluffy. Nice Job!

*Smiles* Greatness!

I love it! The ending was great as well. Great job.

Hari

Continue! Please?

Aww, now this I liked alot. Both Genis and Presea were quite in-character. You also have a good writing style, with your choice of words and the dialouge. I also thogh it was sweet, with the two of them telling each other what was bothering them. I spotted a few grammar error and such, but hey, overall it's a great story

but since u said please, i guess i will. It was quite good, there were some minor grammatical errors but nothing major. i enjoyed it.

Aww, cute. Genis seemed a little too immature, and the spelling could've been better, but you had a good plot. Keep writing!

Great story. Genis is IC, and it is understandable that he would feel some angst about fighting someone he once called a good friend. Presea seems to act more 'human' than she was in the game, but that worked well for this story. Nice ending. I'll look forward to your future fanfics.