Hello it's me. Just thought I'd drop into your profile and see what's new and I found this (The poem that is). At first I thought maybe it was talking about when jesus was with the deciples in the boat and he calmed the sea, but then I discovered it was lifes grand journey. Really cool.

9TailedFox.

guessing you don't go to public school... ha.

anyways; a lovely poem.

"Imagine you think of the God, whose yours,"

should be "who's" or "who is".

I'm just picky. ;) really was quite lovely.

That was really nice, some good imagery used.

i like that, it's interesting. I think you are talking about the Judgement Day

or someone who has come through so much into Gods light

Imagine having a God who so deeply cares

for hopes and dreams and thoughts we share.

Imagine having the freedom to share

your words, your faith, even the burdens that you bear.

Imagine *knowing* that God is there.

loved your poem!

mk

I like it!You should put your other pem Immortal!That would be awesome!Yes,I am who you think I am if your thinking right!Go to my page and you will know who I that one sentence confused you,oh well.I confused myself!I love you!Bye!

That's really lovely. Great poem.

Yay! I love this. It's got really good expression of feelings and the setting. Nice job! How'd you get allowed to do a poem on God in school?

Good job! It really gives you a feeling of spirit. I like it.

I'm betting you don't go to public school. Also, you spelled "by" wrong.