this story was interesting but it wasn't that much about blake and tori it was mostly about alyssa and cole.

great story

Good job on the last chapter. But I just realized an error. You said Chad was bouncing Joel, Jr on his knee, instead of Joel. Where were Kelsey and Chad? And Capt. Mitchall and Mr. Collins?

Good job on this chapter as well. But I remember reading a fanfic where Kite protected the Animarium and said that it was Shayla's destiny to be with Merrick on Earth. Can you rewrite the last two chapters that way? If not that's fine.

Good job. But when the rangers are morphed, it was suppose to be Tori and Alyssa side by side, and Blake and Max side by side, and Danny and Hunter side by side. Fix that for me. But good job overall.

very good story

I love your story and the couples in it

fantastic story, it truly was!

Aww, Max and Danny the gayest pair PR has ever seen. Well, except for Wes and Eric. And Andros and Zhane. And Jason and Tommy, at least in Gung Ho! Not to mention half the Ninja Storm crew. And of course Carter's undying love for Ryan. But you know, other than that.

YEAH it's Hunter. This should be good. (And where's Taylor? And Cam? The pair of them together would make a wonderfully bitchy combo.)

Oh please let it be Hunter. Can't you just see the way too eager Coe up against dark, brooding Hunter? I would love to see Hunter take Cole down a few notches.

Hah. I love the idea of the Wild Force?Ninja Storm team up and I love your, erm, portrayal of the Wild Force Rangers, many of whom I could have defintly have lived without.

GOOD STORY, IT SUX THAT THERE WASN'T A WF/NS CROSSOVER ON THE SHOW (IMO: NS REALLY NEEDED IT, AND PERHAPS THE OTHER DISNEY SEASONS WOULD HAVE BEEN LONGER.) I BLAME BOTH THE WF CAST FOR BEING LAZY AND DISNEY FOR MOVING THE SHOW TO AUSTRALIA. WILL YOU PLEASE DO A SPD/MF X-OVER SOMETIME?

Yep, this definitely could fall into the category of comedy...good job :)

Hunter? Cooing? I know you didn't list it as such, but this story's pretty funny at parts :)