Terrible.

good story

Wow, Stradivari, I didn't think I would find somebody that played string instruments like you. You even composed music, too? That's amazing. But that's beside the point. You... write better than most people. That's why you take so long to update.
Ah! Please take your time! I wasn't hinting anything!

And I apologize for the lack of smarts. I'm no Orion material.

i ♥ the story so far! but isn't there supposed to be an OC? anyways, i think the story is awesome so far. the grammar is also impeccable. where's the rest of it?
*loj*

Good chapter! You portray the characters really well...XD. Update soon!

-Evalia

More! Update now! I am a new supporter!

Yes, yes, yes, much better this time! Much more enjoyable, much more developed. Your style seems a bit more ... 'flowy', this time through. Is flowy the right word ..? I dunno. I like it. o3o
UPDATE SOON YOU LAZY HOE. MOVE IT. NOW. D:
~ Roadie

Yes! More...I like it! It's really really good and-

*sigh*

Mother says I must practice my instrument now.

But it's really really really good...

it's great that you updated, umm you probably forgot me i changed an username...
guess what? i met ewoin colfer!
he was doing a book signing where i live and i got his signature

and also, i hope it's not A and M paring...somehow they are so similar, but then the pairng just doesn't fit, o well i hope it is A and OC...i enjoy your OC charaters

Here from your request for help on the Orion boards. Looking good so far.

Better much better! Loved it! Whatever or whoever your muse is, well, they are doing their job! The Chapter was great and well written! Update as soon as you hav eanother brianwave! Please! I know thetouble with writing long hand, but its worth in in the end, take Eoin Colfer and JK Rowling for example, masters of their profession. Again Update ASAP!

Yours in Fiction
Niccoyne12

Very good, -sighs- I've always loved this story- i especially love how you name the chaptes movements and so on like a real sonata...I guess that would be the point...XD It is good, very good...

Evalia

you're back ^.^
the chapter is good,very much in character, but it gets confusing in certain places :) i can't tell if it is better or not until you update more chapters :) so update soon!:)

That was really good! You are a very good writer, so dont doubt it.

Hehe, am going to follow up chapter by chapter now that you are rewriting...AND I will review too...I really like this story, just thought you ought to know that, rewrite and update soon! XD

Evalia