So I typed General McDowen into google to see what would come up, and got General Irvin McDowell. Hahahahahahahahaha. Irvin. Priceless.

Anyway, it's fun seeing how your interest in Sociology plays a part in how the characters react and interact with eachother. The more you explore and experiment, the more realistic they will become. I'm quite pleased.

Sgt. Sarnoff deserves a good smack, don't you think?

Sometimes thinking about the NW can be depressing. Everyone is at eachothers throat. Can never tell who is there for you, who isn't. Yet they all think they're so right in what they do and say.

It just reminds me of where I live, at times.

Ahah, so I've decided to review again. Just because I miss reading things from you, and want to tell you what I truly thought of each chapter. So, here goes:

I remember you telling me about Rem's castle in Ireland, haha. Makes me wonder if she picked up the accent. It's so strange seeing her scared, though. She's usually so tough, you don't often get to see her softer side. That, I liked. There was only a glimpse of Trainer, but I'm interested to see what comments he'll make next, ahah.

Izzy! I feel horrible for him. Specialists torturing you never sounds fun, but it's a bit worse when it's NW specialists. And I still love McDowen, even though he's really cold to the poor guy.

"Takuya was always yelling when he got intense.." This made me laugh a bit. I pictured someone yelling at him to shut up, ahah.

Dann is so out there, ha. I love how he is so blunt and angry. I can't imagine him being anything else when people who ruined your life are after you. Life is hard.

And on a side note, Aim reminds me a lot of Rock from Metropolis. The movie is in parts on Youtube. Watch some of it if you can and tell me if you see any resemblance.

Hehe, I totally forgot about this story so I kinda have to re-read this story but, despite this good work, but you still didn't put what happen to Davis. So I am still waiting.

YESH! IT WAS PERFECT!

Exellent I love crossovers! I like the part about Renamon/Ranamon they sound similar don't they?

I was just like:

"Doesn't Toni ever update this story? Or has she forgotten it?"

But you just did, and good job.

Write again, and write the right stories.

The ones I like, wait, just keep writing what you want.

-Tremble Wolf

Well, you certainly made it worth the wait. Don't worry, I didn't mind waiting. Let's see... Is this IceDevimon the one from the thirrd season? I'd say so, considering he kidnapped Rika, but then the way Takuya was talking to him... I dunno, bu I'm gonna assume it's the same one from the third season and Frontier. But whatever, unless it's crucial to the plot, I don't need to know.

I loved the Takuya/Kouji argument. "That's cause they don't work. You give me a useless plan, I tell you it's useless, then I provide us with a better plan. That way if it's useless, at least it'll look better than yours." Priceless! And very typical Kouji . And since we don't know if it'll work, all I have to say is: unless Takuya's bad luck results in the two of them getting killed, it should work - eventually.

Nice touch with the Tenth Planet/Ninth Planet thing. Kudos for mixing current events with fiction!

That's all for now. Update soon and God bless you!

-Rael

What happens to Davis? Tell me! Tell me now!

*Dies of happiness* yay! You updated! AWESOME CHAPTER! NO REM DID NOT JUST LOOSE HER ARM! SHE DID! Poor poor rem.If she was real I would hug her.And then she'd probably kill me.

Awesome. Great chapter, in an awesome story, from an awesome author. Ok, kinda cheesy, but I was trying to think of something new to say than just, 'Awesome. Good chapter. Keep up the awesome work.' I know I mean it every single time, but it probably bores you to death justreading the same kind of review from me all the time. But it was good, really good. Update assoon as you can please!

Kouzumi93

Great chapter, I dunno if I read it though...Oh well, none of it is familiar to me, so I'm guessing I didn't read it before...Oh well, as always, this was excellent. I love being out of school because I'm sick...I just hate the sick part...lol...Update when you have the chance, K? I think I should get back to writing soon...been too busy...lol

lol, i love rem, she is so cool. i hope you have a rem/ryo pairing, that would rock! lol, wow, i just broke a fast and now i am scarfing down ribs, lol... im such a dork. in any case,

AND I KNWO WHO HE IS! I KNOW WHO THE MAN IS! (in chapter 11) i know! and i think you knwo what i know.. at least im guessing. lol, i am writing this cool story for you, a short story, like a little note. and its about dan and rem... and other stuff, b ut its pretty intense... actually i just started.. dude, i have so many stories, and like NO TIME!

i love you!

The suspense is building. o_o All out war is possible and the only ones who can stop it are a group of 30 teenagers.

IceDevimon again? *grimaces* He has not left a good impression on us so far in the series, but he might be a good plot device in the story. :D

Awesome chapter, overall! :D

Good chapter! Kouji's crying kinda unnerved me, but it was for a reason, right? I'm looking forward to the actioion - update soon!