This is great. You've really got all the marauders characters and the way you've written their conversations has a really nice flow. I'm a little shcoked that James would cheat on Lily in the first place but now I've seen how you developed his character it seems to only want sex with women who aren't easily accessible. I really hope at some point you update this, I might see if i can find it on the other site.

Just to mention I love that resume.

And, it always goes downhill.

hope u update soon. story is definitely heating up

are you tellin us where to continue reading?

update

CrazyLily

I love this story. It's mature, it's well-written, and it's blissfully free of cliches. I look forward to the next chapter.

update update update update update update update!

Brilliant...This story is great!! However, I wonder why Lily would fly to France to avoid James and then want to have sex with him willingly so soon

awesome fanfic. i really like how you have sirius and remus play into james life. it works out well.
keep it up

-QJ

Howdy!

I like it.. but I'm positive I've read this before.. did you just reload it or something? Ah well, keep em coming! Hopefully less familiar looking chapters! *grin*

i love your story! wish james would be a little less arrogant, though. a little more attached to lily, maybe? hope you can update soon!

omg! you are probably the best write on this site! your story is absolutely wonderful! keep updating

Yay, awesome! I'll get your other story back to you before friday, I promise!

I loved this story first time round and so far i'm loving it even more now.
the whole concept behind it is really clever and i can't wait to see what happens next.
I think you're a wonderful writier and please continue with this story, and soon!
I love how Remus is gay and the way that was shown here, really great without being that over-sensitive cliched stuff you see in so many fanfics now a days, you're story is one of the only ones i'm really enjoying right now! thanks alot
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great chapter
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Great story, Update soon.
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