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shadowstar-gzan
2007-07-12 . chapter 1
Okay, I know this is from over a year ago, but I saw it only had 10 reviews and thought it definitely needed at least one more.

I love your Rocky in this. He's older, and comes across as slightly bitter with the world. And the longing that he expresses for Jason really comes across as truly genuine. The way the story's told, you can't really tell who it is until the very, very end, which keeps you reading so you can figure out who it is. I think, too, that this is the first Rocky/Jason fic I've seen, and it's got me curious about the pairing.

Thanks so much for sharing this =) It's awesome!
PunkPinkPower
2007-03-26 . chapter 1
what an unusual pairing! However I really liked the way it was written. Wonderful work!
Patrykowski der Jaeger
2007-01-02 . chapter 1
WOW. Sierra, wow. I had no idea how great you could write until you linked me to this story. By far the best portrayal of a potential Rocky/Jason situation. Wow. I'm still trying to process it all. Complete and utter awesomeness.
killing Lois with a bazooka
2006-01-22 . chapter 1
This is... unusual. Its not the the normal slash pairing, but I see how they could be harboring feelings for one another. Spiffy job.
Katimavik
2006-01-22 . chapter 1
iM A LITTLE LOST BUT GOOD JOB UPDATE SOON
MzDany
2006-01-18 . chapter 1
Wow, you had me guessing all the way to the end! Great bitter-sweet story. You did an excellent job with all of Rocky's feelings and emotions. I would love to see more slash from you. (maybe with a happy ending next time*grin*)
Greetings from Dany
TricksterWolf
2006-01-18 . chapter 1
I liked this. Then again, I always thought Jason and Rocky should get together ever since Jason came back in Zeo.
RedeamMyself
2006-01-18 . chapter 1
good fic.i really enjoyed it
Sreym
2006-01-18 . chapter 1
Well, well, well . . . this was a pleasant surprise to find this morning! :D

And a very sad one at that. You know I hate you for being so good at this, right? I felt so bad, for both of them! When you were talking about all that little Jason had been through . . . and then of course we all understand what it’s like to be in love with him and know he can’t be ours!

I loved the flashbacks in between scenes, they all followed his train of thought, none of them stood out, and I like the mix of happy and sad ones. And I also like how you only had a little bit of the song in there, just to set the mood :) And nice job keeping the person secret, I wouldn’t have known had I not known already :D

Great job, and welcome to our little corner of the fanfiction world :) Glad you finally came over :p

Love ya!
--Myriah
sparxxa
2006-01-18 . chapter 1
wow, i was not expecting it to be Rocky, good work and by the way Irish band D-Side did the song first! CYA sparxxa
cmar
2006-01-18 . chapter 1
Welcome to the slash side - and a nice job, too! I assume that last part gave away who the protagonist is. Not a common pairing but a good one, and I liked the sad theme of unrequited love and the ups and downs in their lives you put them through. Very good work!
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