 Gelendra 2007-06-22 . chapter 15This is great! I'm seriously loving this (Pura and Wing... so sweet, perfect couple) Hope to see more soon! |
 MariaShadow 2007-02-22 . chapter 14Aww, love at first sight eh? ;) He's such a sweetie tracking her down like that. |
 MariaShadow 2007-02-05 . chapter 13Nice! It's a shame that seeming mutual forgetting of each other, but in a way also necessary to survive the war |
 CuddleMe Kitty 2006-08-08 . chapter 12RE: Wow. Ironhide sure knows how to get people working. Please update soon this is awesome. |
 Crystal Shekeira 2006-03-06 . chapter 12Ironhide does have the rights of it: what good do your skills do if you don't have the courage to use them? |
 MariaShadow 2006-03-05 . chapter 12Go Ironhide! Talk about shock-tactics, but very, very effective at booting them both into action! Interesting little thing there with BlueWing, a warrior who doesn't like the sight of internals. Is it because he knows the owner of those particular internals, or that he just doesn't like seeing them, or both? |
 MariaShadow 2006-02-05 . chapter 11That's so sweet! Young love in action, eh? I love how Blue Wing was so nervous in asking her, that was cute! |
 Flyby Stardancer 2006-02-01 . chapter 11Aw, they're so cute together! |
 HunterBlues 2006-01-30 . chapter 8I've got a softer spot for Prowl than Wing, so I'm automatically on his side for this. Both Wing and Pura should have known better than to attempt a stunt like that. At least Wing (and probably Prowl, too) can take his/their frustration(s) out on Ramjet when next they meet. |
 HunterBlues 2006-01-30 . chapter 7I think this one's my favourite so far. I love the interaction between Prowl and Pura, and the beginning to bridge the gap that was so wide for so long. At least they still have each other while their respective mates are away. |
 HunterBlues 2006-01-30 . chapter 6I wish we could have gotten more fics or chapters with Pursuit. I'm rather liking her, and it's sad to gather that she didn't survive the attack. |
 HunterBlues 2006-01-30 . chapter 5And they never saw each other again (or at least until "Safe Haven"), each regretting their emotions, each wishing that words had not been spoken, that forgiveness had been asked for and given before the end... :( |
 HunterBlues 2006-01-30 . chapter 4Last line caps it off brilliantly! These two may not know what's between them (OK, so Wing does but Pura's clueless at this point), but it seems like it's pretty obvious to some of the others. Evidently, Blaster has figured it out, or Pura'd be free by now after charming Wing to unchain her. :) |
 HunterBlues 2006-01-30 . chapter 3Ah, so she *does* get some charge in. This is more like me, trying to stay awake when I should be paying attention to what I'm doing. If only she knew how willing Wing is to talk to her during her nightly strolls down the hallways... |
 HunterBlues 2006-01-30 . chapter 2Does Pura ever get some decent recharge in? Poor femme's got to be tired with being awake all night, walking the hallways and reading reports. Like the little detail about the door on her quarters being the only one thus far - things like that make for a great fic. |