I like your writing style--not too flamboyant, not too complicated, not too teen, just simple and sweet--and I also love the couples your writing about. Royai is my all time favourite couple, and EdWin my second.

However, I had been hoping that you'd have more Royai stories, and I was hoping you would portray their relationship as more serious. Not the stiff, starched, formal serious but the dating, (or better yet) married, fluffy kind of serious. You see, I've always seen EdWin as the subtle, crack couple and Royai as the committed, more mature-themed couple.

Please don't be upset by my previous paragraph! I really, really, really didn't mean to be discouraging in any way! If any offense has been taken then I'm sorry! 对不起！Gomenasai! I really thought your story was one of the really good ones, judging by Fanfiction standard. I really enjoyed it! Please keep updating!

~Royai~
<3<3

Oh, breaks my heart. Nicely done.

Cute. Really don't know what else to say here. Still... Cute.

... You are very cruel to your characters. This was extremely funny, but I've really gotta feel sorry for Roy. I mean, it wasn't his fault... admittedly treating any dog ('specially a cute puppy like Black Hayate) as anything less than the awesome animal that it is is a horrible thing to do (I'm a dog lover, can ya tell?), but I don't feel that Roy deserves what he's probably going to get. Oh well, such is the unfair way in which the world works.

Very nice. Honestly, the other chapters were enough that I was already planning on favoriting this, but this chapter was especially good. It was a wonderful rewrite, and an interesting concept. I'd actually really love to see an expanded multi-chapter fic based off of this. Possibly a short fic with this basis, possibly a rewrite of as much of the series (manga or anime) as you feel like... it'd be really cool. Admittedly this is just the raving of a happy reader, and need not be taken seriously. Still, this was very cool.

I was fascinated by the rewrite of the first chapter of the series - if you ever think of continuing that story, I'd love to read it.

Leni - You've got some repetitive stuff up at the beginning of this chapter. I still love it to bits, mind you, but it's distracting. (grins)

It's in the first flashback scene where it repeats, starting with, "But she didn't...The doctor and his wife..."

And I still still still wish there was more of this. Winry traveling with Ed just makes me happy.

I think it really captures the sweeter sides of Ed and Winry's relationship, and I like how you even further elaborated. I find it slightly...odd that you would put Winry in Al's place and have Al dead, etc, etc, but it's extremely original. I guess I have to admit that I kinda like it that way too. :D Great job, this'll be a story that I'll think about to try and calm me down right before my piano exam. XD (That's a compliment.)

Wow! Long one! Great job. My only issue: I read about three quarters of the story before i realized this was Ed's first time in Lior, when Al would have been there instead. Awesome story overall!

All of these were great stories, but I liked Changes my world the most followed closely by Star Bright!

Nice, I hope you write some more one shots to go with these!

Thanks for the great read,
Sg

*huggles my ficcie so tight*

I read all of them, so nicely done. Especially this last one. Made me fell warm and fuzzy.

I need to write a fic with a moment like this...I love those moments where they just hold each other without talking or kissing. I saw that in a movie called Waitress. The main character narrated the whole movie, and there was one point where the man she was cheating on her husband with was holding her, and she was talking to her baby and said, "I hope a man will hold you for twenty minutes straight, and make no move to kiss you. Just hold you." That really stuck with me, and I thank you for reminding me of it! Awesome job! And I love your British spelling.

*spoiler review*

Beautiful. I love the bit about him having to readjust to automail after coming back from the gate...

He he...this was funny. I read so many fics riddled with short jokes, when in reality, they are kinda far apart in the manga. This was actually plausible! (I hate how much shorter he is than her in the anime...not in the manga!)