Why you no update? :(

u reli need to update this story bc it reli good n me reli want to no wat happens next

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wow marron is going to go to the extreme just to get trunks back. wow she is really crazy but i love it. cant wait til the next chapter so i can read what will happen next!

I hope you finish it cause it was really good!

You should update this story soon it is food thus far

AWESOME STORY U HAVE TO KEEP WRITE I WANNA NOE WATS GONNA HAPPEN AND Y THAT BITCH CANT LET GO STUPID SLUT

completely, possitively wonderful story. My compliments. Please update soon. It is a great read. Toodles! Keitorin

hey really good story, ur a pretty skilled autor.

ahh! i just started reading this story and its so supsenseful! i need another chapter!

loving it.. update!

Very intersting by far. To be honest I've read your story many times before on another site, and I could never find a way to review your story till now. Please write another chapter because once everyone is back in Japan and Marron does along with her plan all hell may come upon Trunks.