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Reviews For: Just a Second

Ess Tii Eph Yu
2005-12-20
ch 1,
abuseShort, but compelling. Technically proficient, and spiritually inspiring. Very good work.
Tsubasanokoumori
2005-03-10
ch 1,
abuseThis was awesome! It does seem like a bit of a plothole that the Seconds would have anxious looks on their faces as they watched the battle, ne? Oh well. I luvz it quite a bit. Especially the very last line. ^^
ecstatica
2004-10-12
ch 1,
abuseReally well thought out, I enjoyed reading this ^-^
FreyOfDavis
2004-10-09
ch 1,
abuseGood story. I just saw Armitage I for the first time last night, and I wondered about the Second's thoughts during the battle too. Thanks for writing this.
StarStealer
2003-01-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseWonderful story and a very unique idea. I loved the point you brought up. Robots were so hated and yet they trust them (Mariso) with the future of their generation. Excellent observation and a great story. Keep writing!
Chendzeea Li
2002-02-17
ch 1,
abuseHi ah love your story. A shame there isn't a armitage area yet =(
S.H.
2001-07-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseI thought that the way the 2nd by, telling someone the truth from her own perspective, might have made the difference in her own way and in a signicant way too. Good job
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