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| Ess Tii Eph Yu 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuseShort, but compelling. Technically proficient, and spiritually inspiring. Very good work. |
| Tsubasanokoumori 2005-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThis was awesome! It does seem like a bit of a plothole that the Seconds would have anxious looks on their faces as they watched the battle, ne? Oh well. I luvz it quite a bit. Especially the very last line. ^^ |
| ecstatica 2004-10-12 ch 1, | abuseReally well thought out, I enjoyed reading this ^-^ |
| FreyOfDavis 2004-10-09 ch 1, | abuseGood story. I just saw Armitage I for the first time last night, and I wondered about the Second's thoughts during the battle too. Thanks for writing this. |
| StarStealer 2003-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseWonderful story and a very unique idea. I loved the point you brought up. Robots were so hated and yet they trust them (Mariso) with the future of their generation. Excellent observation and a great story. Keep writing! |
| Chendzeea Li 2002-02-17 ch 1, | abuseHi ah love your story. A shame there isn't a armitage area yet =( |
| S.H. 2001-07-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought that the way the 2nd by, telling someone the truth from her own perspective, might have made the difference in her own way and in a signicant way too. Good job |