OMG, that was a great twist with Pan splitting in two! Never saw THAT coming! Very good story! Keeping writing em!

holy cow! this was a really great story! it made me very happy!! :D

LOVE THE STORY!

Love it

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Vortex?? Right...

Hm, muhahaha?? Me no likey at all. Me likey Story but no muhaha kk!! TU UPDATE SOON

Okay, I have this terrible habit of reading and likeing and forgetting to review. Heres to breaking that habit I hate so much. I really liked this chapter however I will need to read, much more. So please make sure that you do finish this story. If you can tell which reviews are from me it will be amazing but oh well. Very nicly done, a little bit longer next time, but nicely done.

- Fruit Cakes

I forgot to add that this story does not match your summary. Pan does not get preganant in this story, nor is Trunks with Marron. You may want to go to your upload page and change your story description. It's could be very distracting. I just wanted to let you know. Laters.

Awesome story. I'm so glad that Pan came back. This was really good. Keep up the awesome work. Laters.

hey this was a really good story except the ending could have been better, but anyhow good work keep it up!