OMG THIS IS SO GOOD! I'm in lovee!! :squeals!:

-DBD-SXA-Psycho
Vic.

I am not going to criticize you at all. THIS WAS BRILLIANT.
I love it. A lot.
You helped me figure out an ending for a totally irrelevent story, and made me really sad, but only because it was written so so so well. This is a very bad review.
This was amazingly cute, and I like how they find each other on this spur of the moment choice. Brilliant...just, brilliant.

I absolutely love the way that you write! It's so... Ga! It's a pleasure almost too sinful to be quite tolerable.

And in my head, Jack looks like Simon Woods of Pride and Prejudice, and Ralph looks like Hayden Christensen... Who do you see?

Is this the end? Please say it isn't! I love this! I printed it off and have read it three times since. I love how you've developed the characters in a logical way from where they were as kids.
Well done +faves

aw! they're insulting each other all ready! *giggles* it's love, i swear to you! i'm not even lieing! keep it up.

Bloody brilliant. This is absolutely fantastic. Wow. I'm feeling inarticulate now... I'll go... WRITE MORE!

MEEP! This is so good! You have to update ASAP!

oh lordie... we started this book in English class, and though i'm not very far into it (yay for five chapters!) i fell in love with the idea of Jack and Ralph... now that could possibly change... *mulls over your Simon-Ralph parts* but it most likely won't! but... OMG i love this so much! you're writing and your story line. No matter how many times i read over the paragraphs it makes me squeal with fangirl excitment! It's so beautiful... i really do love it so *strokes screen* so yes, please update soon. really, soon please =D thank you for writing such a brilliant piece and sharing it, you really have made my day *swoons* fabby-lola ness.

...nothing i can say but "GOD I'VE BEEN DYING TO reAD ANOTHER CHAPTER OF THIS AND I'M GONNA DIE AGAIN TIL THE NEXT CHAPTER IS OUT AND I LOVE THIS SO MUCH OMG"... yup that's about it...

That was great. xD Can't wait for next chapters!

oh! i love it! you're going to continue, right? RIGHT?

Don't mind me, I'll be adding thoughts as I read.
I almosst puked at that dream myself.. -shudders-
A tad cliche with the "Ralph..don't" but, I like it anyway. You write it quiet convincingly, like.. Jack really means it.
aww...-wipes a tear away- Poor ralph, missing Simon so much.
(Sorry for the commentary, it just feels like i remember to mention everything I liked)
I hate throwing up from guilt, or when someone just yells at you when you try to fix things.
Oh wow.. tense moment, yet I laugh at the angry neighbor... I'm still loving your ability to set a mood though. "connecting their lips in a kiss that broke Ralph’s heart." That makes me want to cry.. It's just so.. well phrased..
I like girls... Hah! Bull Ralph, you know you want Jack. You would have wanted Simon too.
For a second I was like "HE KICKED RALPH OUT?!?" But I laughed again when Ralph called Jack an idiot.
I can't even knock on the door of people I'm not afraid of's houses. (I phrased that all wrong..)
Everybody love Samneric!

I love it. Very potent and emotional, especially since we don't get to see much of Jack's emotions in the books. A completely different side of him, one that almost no one writes about, and you did it very well. Amazing story, I loved it.

yay I love this so far please update soon! :D

Nice fic so far. Theres two things though i want to mention: 1) Sam's reaction to Jack. Though he may have forgiven Jack, i don't know whether he would just randomly hug him (but then again he was in a state of much stress, so he could have done anything) and 2) what time period is this set in? It strikes me as being more modern, but i'm not sure. When is it supposed to be set?

Hope you keep writing!