This was great and I so enjoyed readin it!

Wow... does this ever bring me back. I can't remember the last time I saw Early Edition. I loved that show, and I love your fic for bringing me back to it!

Great story! I loved it! Wonderful job!

WOW!
I absolutly adored it!
You are so good at this, it SHOULD be published!
I simply love EE, there aren't many shows out there you can find that are what you'd call clean family shows! I so wish it was still on. :(
I'm not giving up tho!If you want to save Gary Hobson and EE go to early-edition.com.You can tell that you clearly love EE because of how GREAT you are at writing about it!
Well g2g, I wont be happy until I read the sequel to this wonderful story!
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Wow this is a GREAT story. I think you should think about doing real books based on EE, it would be great for all the fans who miss the show.

My only criticue is that Gary is generally more shy at first around kids...

omg that was the best story...i loved it...it was so cute..hehe..:)

Wow this is the kinda story that keeps me awake at night thinking about it BRAVO!

Great story, Christine! Lots of suspense, romance... Hope to read more from you. :)

Great Story! Well written and everyone is kept in character which is hard to do. I hope there is more with Kaitlyn and Gary.

Aww, he proposed! Great fic! -Paper Caper :c)

Haha, this reminds me of an episode when Chuck was telling Gary how there was nothing important in the paper and Gary tells him an upset person shoots their lover and Chuck goes "Yeah, in the *butt*," and Gary goes "Gunshot wounds cause complications, too!" Hehehe! Well, good thing everyone's okay (except David, that is)-Paper Caper :c)

Uh-oh, I hope Chuck's all right! -Paper Caper :c)

Okay, so they've got some clues! Let's see what happens next! -Paper Caper :c)

Ack! I hope Gary gets there before it's too late! -Paper Caper :c)

Poor Gary! Wait, what am I saying? Poor Kaitlyn! Poor both of them! -Paper Caper :c)