I love your stroy! I hope you updata soon and ceep this stroy going!.

WOWS VERY CUTE

i'm actually sort of surprised i would've thought that there would be more RyuKazu FF SO THANX FOR MAKING THIS RYUKAZU LUV X3

You misspelled a few words but all together very good. I love yaoi and you have a unique way of writing. I also love KazumaXRyuhou so thanks. -

wow, that was strange. Keep up the good work :)

Mkae a story out of it or haave you already?/

can you make a story out of it?

please

It was lovely, I like it

can't wait

take care

bye

att:

kari saotome

Ack! How...how could you? -rapes caps lock- HOW COULD YOU JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT? _ -lustful eyes- ...I need more...

-sigh- I'm so pissed. There arent enough Kazuhou (KazuRyu, RyuKazu, Ryuma, whatever blows your skirt up...) 'fics on this site. I'm extremely pleased to see that someone has the balls to write one. HIGH FIVE! I've written a few of my own, but I do believe they were a bit mature for this site. -shrug- Oh well.

Oh my god! !_! How the hell do you do that? I do believe that I have fallen in love with your writing style. You kept Kazu in perfect character, even while pronouncing HIS /UNDYING LOVE/ FOR RYUHOU-CHAN! Who woulda thought that could be done? Well...actually, Kazu is pretty easy to keep in character, but still...HIGH FIVE FOR YOU! -high fives all around- Oh? What do you mean, 'Kazuma's love for Ryuhou /is NOT/ undying'? Oh hohohohoho! -pats xxlinamariexx's head- Of /course/ his love is undying! You just have yet to realize it! As does Ryuhou! ...And, quite frankly, th rest of teh world as well... Meepy. n_n -cries-

Anyway, I cant friggen /wait/ to see Ryuhou-chan's point of view. So hurry up and write teh next chappy! And quick! I'm quickly running out of things to spaz over! -flails unhappily- OH! And I'm /soo-oo-oo-oo/ sorry for meh long review...It's pretty pointless, isnt it? Meepy. I'm disimportant...Or is it inimportant? Or unimportant. Or preimportant. Whatever. I forgot the correct term to be used. -shrugs- It all come down to the fact that I'm not-important... -tears- Oh well. Once again, I'm terribly sorry for my incessant ramblings and hope you can forgive me for teh length of it!

-bows-

-hands xxlinamariexx a cookie-

I don't think you should change anything. It's a great fic. I can't wait till the next chap.!

wow tht waas great :D

Naturally the grammar is shaky. But...otherwise, it's a good poem/songfic (I need to check the genre of this again).

I think that I understand why there's so many one-shots for this pairing. It's because everyone thinks that they need to contribute to this pairing right away because 'no one else seems to'.

In other words, you don't have to rush. Don't forget about it, but don't rush.

5/10 (wating eagerly for the next chapter!)

Hey guyz! It's the author! Yes I know... I'm a bad author...-_- I'll have the next chapter up soon. And thanks to all you people that noticed those spelling errors. Most of those were just typos. Sorry it took so long... The truth is... heh. I kinda forgot about this ficcy... . But I promise I'll have the next chapter up soon! Till then just hold tight!

((Yes...I know it's been almost 6 months...Sorry... Again .))

XxLinaxX

o plz update i must see the next chapter before i die need need need to see the next chapter must know whats in that evil mind of yours... nyways keep up the good work _

yazumi skulls

This was great! I believed Kazuma would think it. Good job. Post the next chapter soon!

This is a good start, but I noticed a lot of spelling errors that kept distracting me from the story. Most of it was typing "your" instead of "you're" or "are' instead of "our." But you also misspelled "obsessed" "scowl" "especially" "different" "course." Two other rather glaring mistakes were these sentences: "Awd but what? Everything." and "Our love canver be." it should be "awed by what? Everything." and "our love can never be."

But OTHER than that, I think this will be a great story, and I can't wait to see Ryuho's POV!