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Yume Takamiya
2006-10-27
ch 10,
abuseIt's getting better dearest. Don't worry, you're getting there. ^^. As for my Xiu Soi, don't worry, there are alot more tortures waiting for her...And for Lu Xun as well (hohohohohohoho!)
Trundle79
2006-08-11
ch 10,
abuseI like this story very much keep up the great work best ive read on here so far
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Phantom Nightshade
2006-08-07
ch 10,
abuseYou should hang your head in shame, young lady.
Phantom Nightshade
2006-07-26
ch 9,
abuseOkay... This was cool! Who are they after cos I wanna know!! Tell me ! PLEASE!

See you on the flip side

Rikku
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Repeated Love Song
2006-07-26
ch 9,
abuseCute little pshychotic kittens weilding claws? Ha, sounds interesting.^^ And a new school too and a twisted ankle? Meh, I see why you took so long, not that I mind or anything. Take your time. ^^ Woo hoo!! But you did finally update!! That dream thingy was totally kewl.Destroythe slimy green monster!! MU HA HA! I always wondered whats going on when your like...unconcious. WhoKnows? Maybe its that? Aww, the couples are saying they love each other then making out!WO1!! hawt!!Or maybe I'm just perverted...who knows? Seriously..Chi Bi, right of the bat, huh? But then again, it has been a month. ^^ Again with the I reckon,woo!! Western!! I'm wooing alot in this reveiw, aren't I? Well, I have no idea what the game go is, but I expected that Xuny would win, since he's a smartass and all. I have no idea seriously...BUT WHO IS THAT DUDE??!? ah, the suspense! Update please :P
Repeated Love Song
2006-05-29
ch 8,
abuseNO! SHE SHALL LIIVE!! Hehehe, you used the star thingie just like Zhuge had his star...I'm happy Sima Yi won that battle..mahaha...er..of the topic now! This stiry is gettin REAL good! I'm so happy you strolled along and created it! ^^ Gives people like me who get bored easily something to do. Poor Lingy..I wonder how he'll take it...I know...HE'LL FALL IN LOVEE!! ehh...I don't know if ur one for yaoi but..(perverse maniacal laugh) WO! okays! So, right when theres a move on the Buny Na relationship she gots to o all unconcious does she? MAKE HER GET BETTER OF FACE THY STICK, SWINE!! So evil, rite? I hope she gets better so the littl;e shy Lu Bun and her can hug and make out...I juts hope Shang and Sying's relationship would get a move on, ya no! Update soon and I won't hurt your dog..ehh..do u even have a dog? If ya don't, I'll hurt ur IMAGINARY dog!! then u will be MENTALLY SCARRED FOR LIFE!! WOO! Eh..ig nore that! UPDATE!
Cenasgirl456 =^.^=
Grease the Spike lover
2006-05-26
ch 8, anon.
abuseWow! Loved it! Aw, poor tongykins! Hehe! Write more please!
Whole Lotta Sarah Tribbiani
2006-05-23
ch 8,
abuseWell written, etc etc, but I still don't get it. I NEED TO PLAY IT!
runickenaz
2006-04-20
ch 7,
abuseOh, this is cool! ^^ A few puncutation errors but it's all well. What will happen next, update soon! ^^ Even though I really do not comment on OC, but hey, that's the fun of creativity, you know? I really like that you have the OC as twins because it seems as if they are really connected with each other, right? What I mean is like, uh, have you ever heard of a fine line between twins - the bond between twins is absolutely connected, I mean in a scientifical way. . . oh, um . . . nevermind, if you do not understand.

Keep up the creativity. I'll be reading, of course and reviewing! ^^
Repeated Love Song
2006-04-19
ch 7,
abuseWOW! Sying kicks serious BUTTOCKS!! He rox so bad, he is such a good wizardy srocery dude! He crreped out the soldier so bad, he must have felt so awesome! And making things spontanously combust on thought! I'M SO JELOUS! ^^ Don't worry at all, as long as you don't seriously scew up I'll always love this story! I SHALL LOVE THIS STORY FOREVER AND BE WITH IT ALL DA WAY!^^ I'm happy your focusing on this one, cuase I'm obsessive to know what happens next~! Sying kiiled Huang Zu on his own, OMGWTFBBQ I'm so...spazzy! (dances) Poor Na thoguh.:( I wonder whats up with her, I mean, she's such a powerful warrior.. So Xuny and Shang found out that they like the siblings! THEN THEY'LL BE INLAWS!! ^^ Poor Bun and his emotional probs..o well! I wonder how Na feels..she likes him!! yes..
Ehh..mind telling me what resentful means? Me no good with big words! YAY!! Ningy is here. He's awesome!! Monster hangover time with Ningy now! (has a shot) Muahaha! UPDATE!!
Cenasgirl456 =^.^=
Grease the Spike lover
2006-04-19
ch 6, anon.
abuseOMG! That was so cool! I've been in that battle and that was a good reconstruction of it Lorzy! I love it! Write more! Now!
tonguelash
2006-04-14
ch 1,
abuseIt was great!
BlueChihuahuaCrimsonFlame
2006-04-13
ch 5,
abuseHey!
Just started reading and its really great!keep up the gud work! i'm totally lukin 4ward to the nxt 1!! pls UPDATE ASAP!
Repeated Love Song
2006-04-12
ch 6,
abuseReckon? O.O I didn't know Na was going western on us! ^^ What Xun said about the first kill was like eh..eheh..thoguh it made me laugh! It's like dsaying 'After you stab yourself for the firstime, it only hurts for the first few weeks. But then you get used to the pain!! (SMILE SMILE)'
Poor little Lu Bun and his romance truobles. :P Well ocourse she's pretty! She's the daughter of Diao Chan!! stupid-head so cute u could just eat him Lu Xun..I didn't know that Shang was two years older then Sying, OW ELL! (dances) I like the fact that they have flames on there clothes...^^ Looks like Shang has problems admitted her feeling to HERSELF, so it would probably be harder to say it to sying!
OMG NA!! Just a simple sword cut? Then again..I've never been cut by a sword so I wouldn't know..But I did get stabbed with scissors one time!! I didn't pass out either..O WELL! decide to post the nest chapter then! God, I luuve this story!! I really wish other people would reveiw it more thoguh!! -_- eh, updatee!!
Cenasgirl456 =^.^=
uniquewriter
2006-04-12
ch 6,
abuseHere's a review for you. And I do enjoy this. I love your your OCs. You got me hooked on this story. Good job!
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