Reviews for Family Reunion

Inspector Brown 2006-05-25 ch 4,	abuseWay to leave us hanging, dude! Cliffhangers are great tools to keep the audience's attention. Write on!
Inspector Brown 2006-05-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI just now remembered, in Chapter 3, you referred to Cathrine as Helen's daughter-in-law. That's a mistake. Helen's daughter-in-law would be the wife of Dash or Jack-Jack. Catherine, who was Bob's daughter when he married Helen, would therefore be her stepdaughter.
Inspector Brown 2006-05-24 ch 3,	abuseExcellent work! Keep it up! Git-r-done!
Inspector Brown 2006-02-22 ch 2,	abuseSo...Is Cathy this "Cyber Cat"? And when does her biosis (BIOlogical SISter) come into the picture?
Inspector Brown 2006-01-19 ch 1,	abuseHmm. Not a bad begining. This could turn out to be a great story when it is finished. UPDATE SOON!