Great story.



From Mark (PLYMOUTH, GREAT BRITAIN)



P.S. I have just ticked the box that says "Add author to my Author Alert list" so I can be alerted on future stories that you submit.

I liked it it was verry good i liked the way you did the ending Verry Nice

This is what Booter-Freak had to say about your story when she MiSTed it:

~Marie Sue. Marie?! Come ON, people, Avatar doesn't not take place in France! Or any of Europe for that matter! The author could have at least taken the "e" off at the end!
~Oh, and she's a princess. Major minus points with me there. DOUBLE them for her having survived a major calamity. TRIPLE the points because how the HELL do you hide a damn baby in a cloak? I mean, unless it's Harry Potter's cloak or something...
~The Kataang. Holy crap, the shipping was more blatant in this fic than The Fortune Teller and The Cave of Two Lovers combined!! Is that even possible?
~What was WITH Maro? Was he on the rag or something?
~Hey, where was Iroh? I mean, I'm glad he wasn't abused or anything, but he could have at least showed up to tranquilize Crazy!Zuko a few times!
~General inconsistencies in the story. Like Airbender skeletons in Zuko's brig. WTF?
~Katara in general. The weeping. The mushy-gushy with Aang. The ZERO attempts to make an escape. That one really ** me off, as I'm sure you already know. Oh, and the whole resurrection thing. Yeah, let's just not even *go* there.
~Again, I'd like to point out the ludicrousness of hiding a baby in a cloak. Parachute pants MAYBE, but cloak? No way, Jose.

i think you should have made it longer. but nevertheless i liked it.

hurry!

the next one? now!

please!

( i just love you ) *friend*

p.s. have you ever considered cliffhanger stories? i just love thoes kind!

You should teel Maries story