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| LeiaRose 2007-12-30 ch 1,  | abuseI just read this and I'm amazed! It's a great idea. You described everything perfectly! :-) |
| Dranzen 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseI don't know why, but I started giggling at the beginning. A pregnant Mical just popped into my head and then - boom! I was gone. This was well-written, yesh yesh. It started out very emotional, the kind of tear-wrenching scene one would expect from the movie - or rather, saw in the movie. You could really feel the emotions of the characters. However, near the end it appeared as though you were rushing it. The feelings and events started getting confused, like everything was on fastforward. I thought it was interesting how you chose Atris. In the end, she does end up evil and didn't seem to be a very good person for the position. However, you portrayed her differently and yet kept in enough of her own character, as though it was pre-Mandalorian Wars. Very well-written. |
| Tibbser 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseI think it's awesome that you used KOTOR 2 characters in the Episode I ending! This was great! I loved it! |
| StarWArsChicky 2006-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseo i like it even if it has Mical |
| Green Earth PFC 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story, the Exile and Atris are like Anakin and Obi Wan. |
| DarthNexus9000 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abusegood story |
| Dante-Raven 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuseI liked this--though very reminiscent of Episode I, but I figure that's what you were going for anyway. I actually thought that maybe Mical--or even Atton had gone dark and the Exile was convincing the dark one away, until the presence of the other came around. Ah well, this was still a bit of surprise--I had never honestly suspected Atris would have been it. Good job! |
| Indy Pollard 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was great! A lovley use of the script. I actually half expected Mical to be pregnant... :P |
| SanguineExile 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuseWow... that was an excellent version of an already powerful scene! Nice work, as usual! I'm going to go off and cry in a corner now. This scene is so emotional in both Ep I and this story... |