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| kirallie 2008-06-27 ch 1,  | abuseGood work!! Go Greg!! |
| Vanagristiel 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness! This is awesome!! This story is just perfect! Wow!! Wow!! Wow!! I had to read it again when I was done!! It is just that good!! Great job!! What a great story!! I guess I just said that... hahaha But I loved it so much!! The way Greg, even though under all that stress, was able to think quick and save not only his, but Sara's and Grissom's lives!! And when they finally find him in the desert!! Oh my goodness!! You can feel all the events comming and crashing down on him, and he finally let's it lose on Sara's arms!! Beautiful!! :) |
| Shakia 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abusew00t, great story! :D |
| CSIFan4Life 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseGreat fic. I really liked it. |
| karmine 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseThis story is excellenta! cant wait for another story like it! (well thats if your going to make another one about Greg and such) |
| Stormchilde 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseNow that was a roller coaster ride that I really enjoyed! |
| laneyseradias 2006-01-20 ch 1, | abuseInteresting story. I have to say that I've liked your other stories better, but I enjoyed Greg's quick thinking, and his quip about "hazing". I noticed a couple typos. The pronouns in this sentence were a little confusing - too many he's: "He had come over to check on the CSI’s process, doing little more than take photos, ones that he had already taken himself, might he add." A few lines after that, Grissom said "settle" instead of "subtle". When David found Grissom and Sara, it said "him" where either "her" or "them" is needed. |
| daily 2006-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat fic, but i hope there will be a sequel for it with how there gonna find the guy who did this and lock him up? |
| Henrika 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuseInteresting story. Grammar and spelling errors sprinkled throughout. Will there be a sequel or another chapter on how they find the killer? Or did he just get away? Keep writing! |
| tenofswords 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story, Emmithar (if that IS, in fact, your real name!). But then, all of your stories that I've read so far have been great, so that's not a surprise. Basically, that confused gaggle of ranting up there is me trying to say: great story! Write lots more! |
| dArkliTe-sPirit 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuseWow...this...this was so good. If anyone flames you, I'll attack them for you. Until then, I'm faving this |
| angw 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuseAn enjoyable fic. Greg saves the day but upon reflection the experience was none too pleasant. PS. Did you mean sutble instead of settle? |
| Sugar Pill 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. Although you'd think it would have been a suspense, I was pleasantly surprised. I really liked how Greg was able to work his way out of each situation. My only gripe is that this one seemed to have a lot of typos (The most obvious one was when Grissom said "settle", but I think you meant "subtle"), especially for you. Other than that, overall, entertaining. :) |
| FanficAddiction 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuseIt had me on the edge of my seat, even though I knew in the back of my mind that he made it out okay. Only thing that's missing is the Sandle pay-off at the end, but your story was so good, I barely noticed the lack of Greg/Sara, which was made up for by the large amount of Greg/Sara friendship. |