This was really brilliant. I love the banter between Molly and Cavennaugh, had me smirking the whole way through.

Really enjoyed it, it would be interesting to see other episodes done like this.

Hehe, Cavennaugh has a dirty mind, doesn't he?

I think you write wonderfully; I totally held on to every line you wrote.

I'd like to see you write out each episode like this. It's alot of work, but you could do it.

hey that was great! r u gonna write some more chapters to it?

Nice story. Good to get more up here!

Good story

Beastly man. He’ll deserve what’s coming to him.

I LOVE THAT LINE! lol

See I found it! It was in the just in area! :D I really liked how you added on to that last area, a private scene between Molly and Cavennaugh. Nice touch. I never got to see the scene where Gunneson was chasing her around, breaking news interupted it in my area and I said quite a few things I shouldn't have...

Was that scene pretty much what happened? Because I've been curious...

Anyways, I liked how you added in more depth to the individual scenes. Overall really good!

Are you going to write more along these lines?