 TheDarkHope 2008-03-28 . chapter 7Good luck with your computer :D |
 Haru Inuzuka 2008-03-18 . chapter 7This is an okay story for me so far, plz update as soon as you can! |
 Zack 2008-01-15 . chapter 1 Hey there,
you got quite a story there, i was hoping if you would try to continue writing this story... if got a writer's block or something... i could help you out if you want... but a story as good as this should be left in a cliff hanger...it is truly a great piece! |
 link2143 2007-11-14 . chapter 6I really must admit, this is one of my fav Naruto stories. Just the way you've changed everything around it makes it quite interesting. I especially like the whole ghost idea with Anko. I do hope though that you will eventually continue to write this story and hopefully finish it. Anyway thanks for the GREAT READ! SEE YA!! |
 †Kami of Maki†∏The Demon Lord∏ 2007-11-12 . chapter 2 you got us addicted with chapter one keep writing you are good. |
 ∏the grand lord of all demons∏ 2007-11-12 . chapter 1 same message as my freind '†kami of maki† except begs you to kill guy and lee to.
they send shivers down my spine. |
 †kami of maki† 2007-11-12 . chapter 1 reads "Female!Garra" twitches for 20 seconds, throws up, tracks you garra down tells him what you wrote and gets him to go Shukaku on your sorry-ass, mother fucking self.
P.S. if you do that i will do somthing very close to what i threatened, please go with femaleHaku for i always thought he was a girl anyway and a hot one to or ANYONE else but that close to emo freak named Garra of the desert.
P.S.S oh, and i'm serious about that threat up there but you write a good fanfic so i do not want to hurt you. |
 Sun S. Li 2007-10-21 . chapter 7I find such a unique story and it's wiped out like that. How sad. I hope you can find the time one day to continue this work. |
 animatedrose 2007-09-11 . chapter 1Aw! Poor Anko... poor Naruto! Hope he'll be okay. What will happen to Anko now? Will they ever see one another again? Hopefully. I love this story! Update update update! |
 Tarrin 2007-09-01 . chapter 7you have a very good story here. hope your computer isfixed and you continue the story |
 DancingPickle101 2007-08-25 . chapter 7dude, your note said a few weeks and it's been months. I'm not trying to pressure you but that's kinda dissapointing for your fans, including me. I mean I really love Intertwined and by the looks of things is seems like you've forgotten about all of the people that have been waiting patiently for your return.
well, I hope you take this review into consideration
-Your favorite dancing pickle |
 Cooltony101neo 2007-05-02 . chapter 6this is a good story but you should explain why ANko is still alive but a ghost and maybe you should have her body like get fix and then she can be in her body again oh and is this an naruto/Anko pairing? because its really confusing me but keep up the good work when you can! |
 Kyuubi's Masamune 2007-04-26 . chapter 1col! |
 Cheese lover Tobi 2007-04-11 . chapter 1DAMN YOU YOU SON OF ABITCH!!
*Whips the tears away*
That was the saddiest moment of my life in reading Fanfic!! I can'tbelive she left him :( i hope things work out for the best.
Also if you havent picked yet i pick Hinata! |
 CAC 2007-04-11 . chapter 7 I think that female/garra naruto pairing is possible well that is my vote |