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TheDarkHope
2008-03-28 . chapter 7
Good luck with your computer :D
Haru Inuzuka
2008-03-18 . chapter 7
This is an okay story for me so far, plz update as soon as you can!
Zack
2008-01-15 . chapter 1
Hey there,
you got quite a story there, i was hoping if you would try to continue writing this story... if got a writer's block or something... i could help you out if you want... but a story as good as this should be left in a cliff hanger...it is truly a great piece!
link2143
2007-11-14 . chapter 6
I really must admit, this is one of my fav Naruto stories. Just the way you've changed everything around it makes it quite interesting. I especially like the whole ghost idea with Anko. I do hope though that you will eventually continue to write this story and hopefully finish it. Anyway thanks for the GREAT READ! SEE YA!!
†Kami of Maki†∏The Demon Lord∏
2007-11-12 . chapter 2
you got us addicted with chapter one keep writing you are good.
∏the grand lord of all demons∏
2007-11-12 . chapter 1
same message as my freind '†kami of maki† except begs you to kill guy and lee to.
they send shivers down my spine.
†kami of maki†
2007-11-12 . chapter 1
reads "Female!Garra" twitches for 20 seconds, throws up, tracks you garra down tells him what you wrote and gets him to go Shukaku on your sorry-ass, mother fucking self.

P.S. if you do that i will do somthing very close to what i threatened, please go with femaleHaku for i always thought he was a girl anyway and a hot one to or ANYONE else but that close to emo freak named Garra of the desert.

P.S.S oh, and i'm serious about that threat up there but you write a good fanfic so i do not want to hurt you.
Sun S. Li
2007-10-21 . chapter 7
I find such a unique story and it's wiped out like that. How sad. I hope you can find the time one day to continue this work.
animatedrose
2007-09-11 . chapter 1
Aw! Poor Anko... poor Naruto! Hope he'll be okay. What will happen to Anko now? Will they ever see one another again? Hopefully. I love this story! Update update update!
Tarrin
2007-09-01 . chapter 7
you have a very good story here. hope your computer isfixed and you continue the story
DancingPickle101
2007-08-25 . chapter 7
dude, your note said a few weeks and it's been months. I'm not trying to pressure you but that's kinda dissapointing for your fans, including me. I mean I really love Intertwined and by the looks of things is seems like you've forgotten about all of the people that have been waiting patiently for your return.

well, I hope you take this review into consideration

-Your favorite dancing pickle
Cooltony101neo
2007-05-02 . chapter 6
this is a good story but you should explain why ANko is still alive but a ghost and maybe you should have her body like get fix and then she can be in her body again oh and is this an naruto/Anko pairing? because its really confusing me but keep up the good work when you can!
Kyuubi's Masamune
2007-04-26 . chapter 1
col!
Cheese lover Tobi
2007-04-11 . chapter 1
DAMN YOU YOU SON OF ABITCH!!

*Whips the tears away*

That was the saddiest moment of my life in reading Fanfic!! I can'tbelive she left him :( i hope things work out for the best.

Also if you havent picked yet i pick Hinata!
CAC
2007-04-11 . chapter 7
I think that female/garra naruto pairing is possible well that is my vote
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