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| Miss Eliza Azraelian 2008-02-02 ch 1,  | abuse*sniffles* Beautiful. It was a good short thing. Thanks. ~ miss. |
| Karaii 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseShort but beautiful. I loved it...this sort of Harry/Severus romance is the only one I will ever truly accept, because this rough kind of love is the only one that will ever fit them properly. Beautiful. I loved the constant mention of 'dust' in this work...and though I'd love to read a sequel, I know it would ruin the mood this one-shot gave, so I won't complain. :D Brilliant, keep it up! |
| Oya 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseYes, never underestimate Severus' intelligence. I like the little slap on Harry's cheek though. I like the angst and anger, and romance all rolled into one. Neither overwhelming the other. |
| Awen 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseWell what can I say, although this will never happen cauz, well Snape is really bad and Harry will never forgive him... I do like your story. |
| Melody of the forest 2006-01-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, well done. Amazing that Harry wanted to be with Severus without knowing the reason why he killed Dumbledore. I think that's a good thing, because your story is different than the others. It's original and it ended where it should. Keep on writing. Hermelien |
| Amanda Saitou 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, very good! Amazing that Harry melted into Severus without even knowing if he was guilty or innocent of Dumbledore's death. And the end was very possible, I can see Harry running away from all those obligations post war. Amanda |
| excessivelyperky 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuse"And that was with my shoes on!"--Dan Fielding, _Night Court_, during an accident with an elevator involving such a kiss. Nice story. Progresses nicely and ends right where it should. I look forward to reading more of your writing. |
| animehpgurl 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abusegood fic. |