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DracoMalfoylover113
2007-04-28
ch 4,
abuseShe moaned and the last thing she registered was the well toned muscles of Jack’s chest before she lost consciousness.

*Sighs* Wouldn't that be a happy thing to remeber!
TIA4181
2007-04-13
ch 4,
abuseHey I know it has been a while since you have updataed but I really like this story and hope you write more I have added it to my alert list please update soon.
FallenAngelForever
2007-02-17
ch 4,
abuseHey do you have any plans to continue this??
Its awesome and I really like it.
a
2007-02-16
ch 4, anon.
abusehey do you plan to finish this story?
sparkygirl82
2007-01-30
ch 4,
abuseHey, just wondering if you have any plans to finish the story. Just read it and really like it. Hope you update!
Barb
2007-01-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved your story, I added it to my favorites. I hope you continue it.
Screwball McNalley
2006-05-08
ch 4,
abusei loved it! Please update soon, it's brilliant!
Tigerlily Brown
2006-05-04
ch 4,
abusethis is really cool!
BlindAlley05
2006-05-01
ch 4,
abuseOh good an update! Great job on this chapter!
Maxwell
2006-05-01
ch 4, anon.
abuseHey, it was worth the wait! Update again soon =)
volleyball-Star123
2006-05-01
ch 1,
abuselove it!! please keep going!~
Eleanor J.
2006-05-01
ch 4,
abuseI enjoyed this chapter a great deal. I wouldn't worry about medical accuracy when it comes to Jack. He seems to recover from his wounds very quickly.
thecrystalkey
2006-05-01
ch 4,
abuseI love this story and was very happy to see it updated. Great chapter. Hope you aren't still too busy to update regularly.

As to Jack still functioning...Well, even if it is ridiculously inaccurate medically, it's certainly realistic within the show's terms. In attempt to be helpful: from what I learned in first aid training, it's head wounds that bleed the most.
scoob2222
2006-04-30
ch 4,
abuseI'm so glad you updated. I think Jack would have no problem functioning with a stab wound. I liked Jack constantly trying to prtoect her. I loved it and cannot wait for more.
Kari
2006-04-30
ch 4, anon.
abuseI'm so glad you've continued with this story...I really liked the first three chapters and love where you're going with it. More!
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