This was so well written. I thought the title "Broken Hero" was so appropriate for Sirius.

wow! this is really amazing! you are an amazing poet! you truly captured the tragic event that was Sirius's death.

Nice Job! Really love it! Amazing!

I liked it.

Beautiful. I loved your use of metaphors - "the black wings of death" and "his spirit ignites" I particuarly liked. Very emotional poem - poor Sirius, a Broken Hero...*sniffle*