DAMN YOU SEPHIROTH WELL MY NOBODY NEOX LOVES YOU BUT NOT ME NEO THE PRINCE OF LIGHT! CLOUD IS LEON'S DON'T FORGET YOU BASTARD

awesome awesome awesome AWESOME o am I repeating myself? nervermind.

but... poor aerith! I really like her ;_;

the best part was this:

“It’s just…. It’s really hot in here…”

“Really? It’s sort of cold. Oh, wow, you’re burning up.”

“Leon… Augh! Oh my god! Oh! Ow! God! Leon!”

“Calm down! Calm down.”

Hehe, your comment above reminds me of what happened when I was fighting them. At one point, I was beating the living hell out of Leon, and all of the sudden, Cloud dashes forewards, slides infront of Leon and places his sword infront of him blocking all my attacks. I had to pause and fangirl for like, 10 minutes.

I loved your story! I have no CLUE what the heck that Ouch. person was talking about this being a 1 out of 10. I liked it. Well that may be partly because I'm a big sucker for Leon/Cloud fics...I absoulty love them all! Don't ask me why.

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Aww... I like it! Its good, Bloodyrose6. I really do like your topics.

I know. I'm twisted... bwahaha...

Good job!

As Cid said, “Oh my god…" But really, not the good kind. That was absolute garbage.

One: Rape ain't pretty, and it fucks people up.

Two: I think Cloud would trust the people he knows best a little more. Otherwise, I'd think he'd trust Cid and Aerith more than Leon.

Three: Leon and Cloud wouldn't be all love-and-blush. They're soldiers, and men, not little teenage girls in daydreams.

Four: Their first kiss? My god, what the hell? How old are they? For some strange reason, I was under the impression Cloud and Leon were men. Obviously, we played very, very different games.

Five: Aerith wouldn't be so heartbroken. She loves Cloud, but more than anything, she'd want him to be happy. Remember FFVII? Yeah, obviously you don't.

Six: Why the hell did Sephiroth rape him to begin with? Sephiroth is crazy, and Sephiroth is evil, but he's not out to rape people. That's just- Wow, just a really, really bad plot device.

And finally: Rape is a really, really bad thing. Not funny, not cute, not a plot device. Don't take such serious issues and trivalize them. Seriously.

So, I'd say 1 out of 10. A piece of crap, all in all.

por cloud, but i liked it anyways.

that was no one shot a one shot is a 1 chapter story with aemon thought you'd like ta know

AW That was so CUTE!

I loved it :D

that was a really good fanfic,your really creativc

Poor Aerith! Oh who cares! Go Cloud and Leon! I loved it.

omg it was so cute, i was laughing a lot, and fangirl squeeling, i really really liked it.

hey I loved the fic i wish there was more! could you do a sequel or something?

t/y

sano's queen

coolness I lurves rape though you could've added moe detail it ws very well done!

Okay, despite the total Aerith OOC-ness (or bashing, whichever you did, lol) THIS STORY WAS SO CUTE!

Haha, I loved it! *adds to favorites*