Lotta weird things going on? How is it Pikachu can talk? What does Mewtwo (your equivalent of Voldemort, I guess) want from Nurse Joy or Jack? Guess the girl with the bike isn't as important as Misty was. Awesome ideas! Love the Shrek reference.

I have to give you props man, I saw this and spotted how many chapters there were and words total and was like, "HOLY CRAP!"

How long did it take you to write this?

JR i do apologize for my character's words toward Erika it's just his own way of saying he's worried and fears something bad will happen to her.

(Laughs) JR! You are the best at adding humor to your story guy ever! Your story is so funny and adventurous!

i agree JR. Yo-Yo Man should teach Jena a little more.

i think that peter would win. but Toff does control earth so to me it could either way.

Wow... thats ALOT of chapters. O.o

O_O HOLY SHIT! 230 chapters? Not even I can do that! O_O

Though.. you only got 32 reviews O_O

That is about the longest fanfic ive seen in my work!

i love it!

whoa.

249 chapters. In one year.

O.O

Lisa needs braces!

cool story. i can;t wait to finish it. but 245 chapters and still writing? i read fast but even this poses a challenge to me. Well anyways i know i can finish it. Keep on writing.

Kannalover

that was amazing!

Awesome I like how Peter gets defeated also I like when Jack releases omnislash.