 calicogoat 2009-06-01 . chapter 1I've only heard the title song once or twice somewhere, sung by children, and it played in my head the entire time I spent reading this, which just made everything more skin-crawlingly horrifying. Poor Aziraphale, and poor, poor Crowley. Brilliant writing, though! |
 GuesssWho 2006-11-27 . chapter 1THAT WAS DEPRESSING! I HATE YOU!
Well, not really. But Jesus! |
 GoldenRat 2006-11-27 . chapter 1This is one depressing Apocolypse. |
 angelofplottwists 2006-03-28 . chapter 1Wow. That was powerful. And...oh, poor Crowely! And Aziraphale. Did they both die?
I loved this story, and the small changes you made that affected the whole outcome. Yeah. Beautiful. |
 The Iza 2006-03-08 . chapter 1-sniffle- Beauifully written.
;_; The ending makes me want to cry...-weeps- |
 firemaiden01 2006-02-19 . chapter 1.:clothes mouth:.
Wow... that was superb, I must say. I love the way you turned the story, it was a complete revolution, a 360 degrees turn.
Of course I don't really like what happened in the story... poor world... but well, He said it had to be done.
P.S.: That 'He' above could very well be Him, God; Him, Lucifer; or Him, Adam.
C ya! |
 EdenSnake 2006-01-25 . chapter 1Didn't mean to make you cry.
MRAH.
This was depressing. But realistic.
THANK GOD YOU DIDN'T WRITE GOOD OMENS, EH?!
Not that this wasn't excellently written. But I think I liked the sharing a bottle of wine on the tarmac better than, you know, death and destruction.
Liked the slash though. |
 MasterMind v.2.0 2006-01-21 . chapter 1Aw, this end was so...er, tragic; you made me cry. Poor Azi and Crowley although it was quite a brillant twist, I must say. Good job. :) |
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