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| Shingalala 2008-08-16 ch 7,  | abusePlease, please, please update this ASAP I absolutly love it and I cant wait for the next chapter, so shoot me I'm a smut addict. One of the best stories I've ever read and trust me I read alot. Chocolate Brownies when you update... with human Maugrim on top... covered in whipped cream and chocolate... and a cherry :-P* Drool. |
| warrior baby 2008-07-02 ch 7, anon. | abusewow, really good. I like the pairing, keep going because i REALLY want to read more! |
| lily.flower 2008-06-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseoh, wow! This is such a great story, and I'm not even through reading it yet! “I’m just glad I have a purpose for once. I’m like Dad. I’m doing something for a good cause. Right? I’m like Dad?” omg, that made me cry! I love Ed. *sob* anywho, great story! *runs off to read more* ..lily.. |
| Facing Reality 2008-05-31 ch 7, | abuse:) |
| frolicks.with.froggies 2008-05-25 ch 7, | abuseThe concept was rather disturbing, but the story was amazing! It reminds me of a Harry Potter fic I read that was Similar. I don't think I've ever read a dark Narnia fic before... it was really good. Is it complete? ~K |
| Firebrand 2008-05-17 ch 7, anon. | abusewow. this is hot! please write more someday! |
| heavenzfiend 2008-05-04 ch 7, | abusei love your story! this is very.. interesting =) please continue writing soon. |
| Lady Danielle 2008-05-04 ch 7, | abuseFrom an honnest fan; I beg you to write some more. I have fallin' in love with this story; so please update. :) |
| viennacantabile 2008-02-22 ch 7, | abuseoh *bleep*. there's not much else to say than that. this story is provocative, passionate, and unbelievably erotic. not to mention original. please continue? :D |
| Tawnyleaf 2008-02-13 ch 7, | abuseCome on. Stop there and I die! I read all of it, it is good, and very well written. Just keep going! I |
| ChildlikeEmpress 2008-02-04 ch 7, | abuseWow this is great, please continue! |
| Darkness-Lightness 2007-12-30 ch 7, | abusewow this story is wicked |
| Muse of Scrolls 2007-11-16 ch 7, | abuseWow, this is another amazing story of yours. Maugrim seems to be like himself, but there is a greater depth to his personality. I've always loved wolves even those who portray "villains" in films, and to see this story just makes me tingle. But it has been over a year since you updated it. I wish I could see an update for it. Definitely looking forward to when you do. |
| TastyAsItGets 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseYikes! This is freaking good. Maugrim is in-character even though he "likes" (can't think of a better word) Susan. He's a jerk still, but he still has some kind of feelings down there. I look forward to reading the rest. :D |
| myelephantgirl 2007-10-30 ch 7, | abuseI really enjoy this story. Maugrim's obsessiveness is really well done. I liked the juxtaposition of Maugrim's lustful and loving emotions towards Susan next to his unrepentant eating of Edmund. He know's it's wrong and he does it anyway to be with his girl. Awsomely done. I hope there'll be more, cause this story is great. |