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| Maggie Moony 2008-06-17 ch 1,  | abuseGood story |
| Jaby 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseI read this story more than once and every time I do it again it makes me laugh and smile. Loved it. |
| Anastashia 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseThis one had me roaring. I so love the way you do playful Lee and Kara. |
| Iflytez 2006-12-14 ch 1, | abuseLoved your story. |
| alexceasar 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abuseAbsloutely great. So Starbuck. not only to tease him so but to tell him Ilove you that way. Great job. |
| viper47 2006-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, I loved this one! It was so perfectly set up how you showed both their POVs. I hope you keep them coming! |
| annpo 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abuseWhat a delightful finish. I'll have a grin plastered on my face for hours now. It's nice to see then 'play'. Even better to see that Lee can actually surprise Kara. Loved Helo's comment too..."I'll speak well of you at your funeral, sir." Great exit line. Thanks for a good read :) |
| fallenangelcrys 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuse:D love. |
| BlackRaven 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseReally liked it... I mean really! a lot of times people write "Starbuck pulling pranks" stories that are totally unrealistic, juvinile or out of character... this one was right on the money! I can actually see her doing this sort of thing to Apollo! Good Job! |
| Chicklit 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is fantastic -- Smart, funny and completely in character. If only we could get this on TV! |
| Angelii 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI wonder did you get the you want to kiss me from miss congeniality because that was a great movie i hated the secound one though it sucked! |
| rain1657 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abusethat was awesome! You captured the characters well, and your writing flowed extremely well. nicely written |
| Ammonite 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseI laughed out loud, this was so much fun - and you stayed pretty much in character too. You just need to do a better job of proofing before you publish. It helps to print out your work first. I think it's hard to proof on screen. If only Lee's problems could be so easily solved, but it would certainly be a great start! |
| midnightair 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuselol. that was a fantastic story. i laughed so much! i also liked that little bit between helo and lee. overall wonderful story! |
| Shazzer 2006-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOL, that was really funny, write a sequel Please. |