Triple Triad, gotta love it...
XD Hahahaha, love the 3rd paragraph~ shields up, cap'n! run away quisty...
Hehe awesome! :D Good stuff!
And that ending, what implications are you setting up ;) hmm? (Hey! Speaking of which, have you read "If my heart weren't broken"?? That was the first lagunaxquistis that i had seen... and it's pretty good)

Eh, minor thing (doesn't realy matter, but *shrug*):
Alone on the [space ship] serving as a monument
~ "spaceship"

Well written and very entertaining. It's rare to see Quistis and Laguna interacting but you did an absolutely lovely job on them by keeping them both in character. Hope to read more of your works.

This is awesome. I've had the weirdest feeling for months that Laguna and Quistis would make an interesting couple, for some odd reason. Well a good story, and I believe you have inspired me to proceed in writing my fic. Thanks much.

I really enjoyed this. The Quistis characterization is unlike any I've seen before. I'm not sure it works for me, but it's refreshing, and the writing style is very casual and cool. It flows very nicely.

Hey, I never even considered entertaining the thought of a... Lagistis? Quguna? But it seems like it could work in an odd way. And I can't help but laugh at the notion of Quistis playing the adult while Laguna goofs around.

Cuteness. I like very much, and some nice inner monologue for the instructor.

~Aqua~

I liked this. Quistis beating Laguna at cards because Laguna gets distracted was cute (illogical!). I could so see Quistis thinking it and then trying to rationalize it and being like, "no, too weird, variables do not compute!"

Also, I'm not sure if this was tense switch or not, but I thought I would point it out anyway, just in case:

"But it wasn't like her to mope like this. Chin up, deep breath, turn around and walk back to your cabin – and there was Laguna behind you with a frown on his face."