|Reviews for Proof of Love|
| meluvblue 3/3/09 . chapter 1
that was pretty good, and you got the personalities of the characters almost exactly like in the series .
| Seeker Zenn 8/14/08 . chapter 1
i dont usually go for hetro stuff. but that was really really good. kinda smutty... but i like that.
| obsidian butterflies 7/29/08 . chapter 1
Wow..very nicely done! Pretty good for your first lemon :)
| Oobersezzy 5/5/08 . chapter 1
Great story. It had a lot more detail than you'd usually find, and I think that is what really makes your work stand out. *nods*
I enjoyed it and I look forward to seeing more from you. I made doubly sure to add you as a favorite author.
| darkflame666 3/22/08 . chapter 1
that was so good!
i'm panting like hell right now...i'm flushed and sweaty...man that was so hot!
SECOND CHAPTER PLEASE!
| Kisa167 3/9/08 . chapter 1
You should make a second chapter to this story! it's very well written! you're quite descriptive..
| KirsSweetAngel 2/6/08 . chapter 1
are you serious about that being your first lemon fic? cause your really good at it lol -
| Shadow Dancer666 1/24/08 . chapter 1
you gotta love Ryoki! *pets him* he's just hopeless at being nice, but he tries! *squeal of lovingness* thanks for this excellent fic!
| CBBB EE Yoko 10/26/07 . chapter 1
I loved your story, for the most part the characters were right on spot, like Ryoki's line - "My sheets" xD It made me crack up. Hatsumi was a bit off but if it wasn't the story would suck so good job and keep up the good work!
| luvdarain5 10/16/07 . chapter 1
Lovely, well written, tender and in very in charecter-this was wonderfully done. Bravo!
| NanamiYatsumaki 8/1/07 . chapter 1
Good job, its okay if you felt tense while writing that...anyone would have felt tense!
| fat.old.man 7/15/07 . chapter 1
that was amazing! i hope youll write another ryokixhatsumi fic.. youre a great writer )
| Foreverasecret01 6/4/07 . chapter 1
wow, that's good. totally orgasmic. thanks for posting! - i loved it!
| Maverick 5/17/07 . chapter 1
That was really good, more please? XD
| ghu 4/21/07 . chapter 1