 Mafkeesje 5/29/10 . chapter 1Heart-breaking:'( |
 superanimated 10/28/09 . chapter 1... -bursts into tears-
SO SAD. |
 LovelyLittleAngel 12/17/07 . chapter 1-sniff- so sad, but so well written... |
 Kaira-chan15 8/5/07 . chapter 1Omg that was so sad I'm crying...:( It was very well written though, nice job. |
 HannahSakura.Pinoy 3/27/07 . chapter 1So sad. But lovely |
 dashdashhypenspace 12/10/06 . chapter 1This is a great fic. It's very well written and the feelings are portrayed so well. It's sad and good, and the last two lines were perfect. |
 Illucida 6/21/06 . chapter 1i don't know why angsty stuff like this make me want to cry...
I enjoyed reading this fic.
Poor Kakashi...I think he's doomed. |
 Quack says the duck 6/18/06 . chapter 1There aren't words. I'm crying. He is the only one left again. Amazing. All we can do is hope that this doesn't actually happen in Naruto... |
 Zannia 3/20/06 . chapter 1 I won't write a lot.All I will say is the highest compliment to(in my opinion)an acceptable writer I can pay:Great peice. |
 Aseret Kitsune 2/5/06 . chapter 1Wow. This was amazing. So sad. I love the emotion and flow. Great job. Hope you don't mind if I add this to my C2. |
 Kasmi Kassim 2/4/06 . chapter 1Beautifully written Kakashi introspective. Keep up the good work! |
 SailorKagome 1/31/06 . chapter 1What is there to say that hasn't been said? It's excellent, tear-jerking, properly angsting, wonderfully morbid, and overall incredible.
I totally started to cry. :_: |
 Destiny1029 1/20/06 . chapter 1AH team 7-ness... not only that but a differant look at things! Thank GOD! I mean everyone has all these wonderful fairy tale non-realistic endings and it just makes me mad because it ruins it all! But you finished it off _ Great job, i loved it. It was sad, and emotional, and it got me hooked! whew, I needed one of these to read! |
 glitch and gremlin 1/20/06 . chapter 1Oh god, that was such a wonderfully, horribly sorrowful story.
I love stories like this. Blame it on morbid curiosity. But the way you wrote this was perfect; the characterizations are great! Especially Kakashi's.
Great job! Hope to see more stories like this from you! |
 Fantastical Queen Ebony Black 1/20/06 . chapter 1*sniffle*
Wow. That was tragic, but a well-written tradegy. There were nice little touches in it, and it seemed in character most of the time. I liked how you mentioned Neji and Gaara's infatutation for Naruto (I personally believe they both have very strong feelings for him). The ending words were toching as well. *sigh* Woe. Twas beautiful.
Constructive crit, if I can find anything... Oh, in Naruto's part you had 'dive' instead of 'drive', and I feel in that sentence maybe you should've used crazy as opposed to nuts just for the sound. And I am curious has to how everyone died (all suicides?). That's all.
Much love,
Ebony |